duper sand, what the fuck, what kind of wack ass shit is that, yo check this/
haze of smoke/
Yo dyke go home/ there can only be one king on this microphone/ you bite like a rhyme clone/ so ima scatter you in different time zones/ afrter i rip your cells and bones/ your body parts can call each other on telephones/ find ya blind cause i smell cologne/i'll excell alone/ and never sell the thrown/ im the biggest name in rb its well known/ while you cant even spell your own/ punch me and i can tell like hell your groan/ break your fist cause my words have a hard shell like stone/ lyrically make you dwell in my cyclone/ say fawell to this home/ cause when i yell disses yall be blown/ to new heights were punch misses are unknown/ its all troublesome/ how your weak ryhmes collaspe around you and leave you in the rubble son/ but ill resurrct you and kill you again for double fun/ the only time sand blasted a bazooka was when he chewed bubble gum/ only fools come to mega and in these ways provoke/ sand must have been in a haze of smoke/ or a daze of coke/ write flows not novels your sa's are a joke/ in a craze i choke/ untill my flows find new ways to soak/ crack you like an egg then replace the yoke/ duper sand dont make cents and cant pay cause he's broke/ your gay as folk and like to sway the fuckin votes bitch , bring it

nice post, good vocab some type of structure n it flowed.......like to see harder punches tho.......elevate dawg

BAN THIS FAG FOR BITTING CORMEGA'S NAME! WHAT A FUCKIN IDIOT

BAN HIM FOR BEING WACK AS FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

^Can't believe he Actually Rated It^

hey cock sucker rythmic tendicies youi fuckin moron i didnt bite the rap you dumb jew i bit the name
my name is a rappers name i like him so i used it for this gay ass online battle forum, b-manual is my actaull name but whatever, the rap's mine so yea fuckin give some feed back stupid fuck

^Did I Say You Bited It..LMFAO^

As For The Rap, Elevate Everything - Vocab, Wordplay, FLow - EVERYTHING... LMFAO

fuck all youy lame ass niggaz actually any you got shit to say challage me to the battle otherwise sit the fuck down and get the fuck back stupid mutha fuckers

so why wouldnt you give feedback on it and why would you rag other niggaz who did ya know

this fucking sucks...not even worth anyone's time to read

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dude, how can you say people should challenge your or sit the fuck down...when all you did was write a diss...( wack diss, I might add)...to sand instead of challenging him to battle?

elevate everything, like rythmic tendencies said, and try to work on flow and coherancy most of all.

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i did he didnt accept it stupid ass
that is why i got pissed

WORD...BANNED FOR GAYNES!!!









I WISH!!!

woah. . . that was d o p e


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