Dez

I can remember what she said, her words still echo...'Daniel, I Will Love You Forever'
mailed her the key my heart.. she made copies, cleaned me out and put a 'Return to Sender'
The world is ever-so-tender.. dont mistake it for kind, itll always be about the money
'Feed the Children' they shout.. meanwhile their executives live a life full of luxury
depicted imagery.. everybody wants you to see the 'Moral' point of view
meanwhile they are killing their babies before birth..but 'its a womans right to choose'
even if we win, we lose.. some people will always consider you a fluke
'Give credit where credit due'.. fuck that, instead lets put Monica Lewinsky on the news
yeah its true.. the only person you can truly count on is yourself
everyone is Two-Faced..they just only reveal one to everyone else





Pot1ent

I know i got two eyes but it surely not to see who's disguised
Centre of Two-Facing bring divides from all peeps who contrive
Others life...They doing it to decide the course of others futures
Am i two-faced? Yeah all modern life are while on they computers
I'm a tutor while spittin on rb yet a student in dead community
School...*damn matt you fool* now they no i don't pledge unity

Steeze Switch

suppose people learn to grow up being two faced
Leaving one trace with two persanilty imbued in place
To screw the race of mankind by hittin below the belt
So they felt...Maybe they do it so they hold some help
They two-faced unable to relate as one and to face
The truth...To have twice as much use to their fate
But it only complicates their stakes to dodge death
Two-face people are those that hold grudges best
Can't impress so they imitate Jim Carey on the mask
But to eventaully know the fake one will end up last

what are you doing baxter?

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she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

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i reopened it, please dont up it and make him close it again.

simply reply to other peoples and give them the link to reply back to this, works for me.

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aight yall i thought this post was hella tight. Let me start wit Dez first. i was feelin the vocab and wordplay the most in here. ur structure was good, and the flow was still on target. my favorite lines were
"even if we win, we lose.. some people will always consider you a fluke
'Give credit where credit due'.. fuck that, instead lets put Monica Lewinsky on the news
yeah its true.. the only person you can truly count on is yourself
everyone is Two-Faced..they just only reveal one to everyone else
^^i thought that was an awesome ending.
Onto to Pot1ent verse. i thought the wordplay and the way u flowed it together (u know what i mean?) was the best. my favorite lines were
"I know i got two eyes but it surely not to see who's disguised
Centre of Two-Facing bring divides from all peeps who contrive
^^i was feelin that as a good way to start the verse
Aight now to the last, but not the least verse. I thought steeze switch did a great job wit vocab and flow. i thought the wordplay was there but the vocab and flow were the highlight of this verse, my favorite lines were
"They two-faced unable to relate as one and to face
The truth...To have twice as much use to their fate
But it only complicates their stakes to dodge death
Two-face people are those that hold grudges best
^^i found that extremely interesting

overall good post, id probably rate it a 8.5-9/10. great job yall, i cant wait to read more open mics from u guys.

peace.....

The steez switch was mine...it was only a two person collab...

Pz...uppin

^^^oh ok, my bad man, we then u really ripped it with that verse. good job and keep it up. props to both of ya.

peace.....

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