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alrite man drop ur shit.............................................. .................................................. ..

You non-rappin newbie, OLI's a singin pup/
The singers fucked, lace my punches and string him up/
With a string of luck, rapped tightly around his throat/
Let him choke, on his own words when his style's broke/
Dogg's verse is only "noted" cuz his punches are "played"/
But I'll split your shit and laugh as your halves part ways/
I've read your shit before, this biter's hittin a book up/
Let me help you, throw my left and give him the hook up/
Cuz O_D's the whackest rapper to ever be heard/
Livin the net life, endin his rhymes with "Microsoft, Word"/

ok Lethargic dats sme poor shit man, is dat y ur *blushing?*,
O_D's about to drop, is that y your blood preshures *rushing*,
you say im da wackest rapper dat uve ever *heard*,
well atleast ive been *heard*, cus ur shit so borin ppl fall to sleep afta da 1st *word*,
oh n if im so shit den y u got a worse record dan *me*,
cus afta cing urs, im kinda happy with my *three*,
you cnt even see me but your still scared of my *presence*,
as Lethargic with his 1 inch dick, still stays in *adelesence*,
Lethargic man im so glad dat i battled *you*,
cus my 1st victory was da easyest thing dat i eva had to *do*.

bitch.

uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. .......both lookin 4 a win yall.pz

yeh yeh oli_dogg straight up won that shit, sum of the punch lines were ill, lathargic u had sum gd rhymes but i was feeling oli mre in this battle
pz

oli dog
that shit was nice

ya both had sick verses but oli dog took it

my fave lines was
LETHARGIC:You non-rappin newbie, OLI's a singin pup/
The singers fucked, lace my punches and string him up/
With a string of luck, rapped tightly around his throat/
~nice an tight, but the signin pup shit,,, naw~

OLI DOG:you say im da wackest rapper dat uve ever *heard*,
well atleast ive been *heard*, cus ur shit so borin ppl fall to sleep afta da 1st *word*,


yo will sum 1 plz vote on these plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82352
and this 1 especially
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82245

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thx pps.lets get sme shit on da poll.uppin 4 votes............................................. ....................................pz

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