hook:
After I beat every m.c. who steps to my right-
Defeat every rapper till nothings left but a caffeine hype…….

If you an m.c……..b-boy………, breaker………, graffer or a dj-
they’s love but if you a fake thug then give me a BJ.
Damn right my reference is im cocky, son of bitch-
You mad cause you try and cock me, but my sex preference wont switch.

verse 1
For every thousand m.c.’s that came and put in work..i leave 500 sleign the other 500 murked-
For Claimen they hard with bars and got that ass touched like a cavaty search.
For every line you made there’s 50 you kill claimen you ill…
but foreal played-
You couldn’t come off the top if you were getting a fade.
I aint in this for the buissness , I flame raps then extinguished rappers finished.
Extra crispy…. Blemish your image in a scrimmage .so fuck yall!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You give brains to get A~HEAD and couldn’t even FORWARD a phone call.
And I rep VA like Very Arrogant Verbal Assasin.
While you rep an area code where they call you an asshole and has been.
There’s 2 type of m.c.’s besides me-on the M~.I~.C
Those with ovaries- and those that cram N.U.T’s in they ass cavaties.
That’s whyThe day I get signed im a spit nine and start billing-
My record label for the track and contract killing.
Ive been doing this since before the PONY EXPRESS-
Give me 20 minutes you’ll be impressed….
on how I address lines and deliver text to the world faster then fed~ex.
No Im not arrogant and this aint a complex-
But you say you’re the shit and I agree in a different context.
You like ALCHALICS ANONOMYOUS….when you drop bars-
Your groups congratulates you but nobody knows who you are.
I spar- with hooks and punchlines keep my my focus ample-
Then let rappers sample if we ever battle- grapple your adams apple-
And twist it off like the cap of a Snapple.
Fuck hip hop!!!!!! this commercial bling shit got me anoid-
I stay fresh dressed rocken sean john but hate reject labels so fuck BAD BOY.
Fuck any cat that forgot what this is aboute-
So if you soft and say your hard hitten im knocking you the fuck out.
36 times one for each tooth in your mouth-
AND GIVE YOU A ROOT CANAL THE SIZE OF 95 NORTH AND SOUTH.

hook:After I beat every m.c. who steps to my right-
Defeat every rapper till nothings left but a caffeine hype…….

If you an m.c……..b-boy………, breaker………, graffer …… dj-
they’s love but if you a fake thug then give me a BJ.
Damn right my reference is im cocky son of bitch-
You mad cause you try and cock me but my sex preference wont switch.

hook: wasnt your best i know you could do better than that...dj-bj
verse: once again you flow killed this... wordplay was top notch as usual...vocab and mulits did a nice job spicing this up
good drop
if you would be so kind
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84636

dog if you start usin multis' then i can give you a comment without multis flow is nuthin

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MAC4LIFE, M.multis A.authority C.commitment,MFL
Pacaso mac the Baskin Robbins Street(hustla tryin to scoop up this ice and cream)

i wanted the hook simple and i thought the bj line was nice ....lol.....
*****dissapointed in homself ties a nuce around his neck and looks at realist******
this is your fault..........i just wanted to be loved...........

thnks for the feed back pop!

your wrong pop and they multies my styl comaflouges them with breaking points.....plent of m.c.'s dont feed into multi and do fine but none the less thank you for the coment but style isnt big with me its content

spit this to copywrites holier then thou and you will see im right

uppin

yeah...this shit was dope...as ya open mics usually are...the concept was good...and the vocab too...all the thingz you usually have in this piece are as good as they usually are...lol...I'm lazy so I don't feel like typin' all the thingz that was dope in this...but ya still gotta work on ya multi'z man...damnit...if ya ass would just get aim express like I been tellin' you then I could give you lessonz...private lessonz...where maybe I could put some "knowledge" in ya ass...lol...

^^^I was just playin'...I ain't gay...so sorry to bring some of y'allz hopez down...but I just had to clear that up before some homothug triez PM'in me or gettin' me on aim tryin' to cyber...lol

damnit THIEVES ignore TONE and PAXS' last pm they saidf since you not gay dont swet it....LOL....yo email me at azazeal666@yahoo.com and we can still build

^^^yeah thats right gotta work on that point but it's dope thought^^^

yo i was really feeln the flow, the style kind of reminds me of someone i know.. anyways the word play was nice.. the topic was there, vocab was pretty nice.. and the structure was well put.. overall ... shit was dope.

the line that got me....
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You like ALCHALICS ANONOMYOUS….when you drop bars-
Your groups congratulates you but nobody knows who you are.
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man...

The hook was good, i think you could have done something more creative...but you did flip it an make it humerous so that was tight lol...

but onto your verse...great spit man, it came hard an really repped ya shit...

For every thousand m.c.’s that came and put in work..i leave 500 sleign the other 500 murked-
Very unique, pure fire...the way you worded it it came out nicely..good shit


For Claimen they hard with bars and got that ass touched like a cavaty search.
For every line you made there’s 50 you kill claimen you ill…
but foreal played-
You couldn’t come off the top if you were getting a fade.
I aint in this for the buissness , I flame raps then extinguished rappers finished.
Extra crispy…. Blemish your image in a scrimmage .so fuck yall!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Also very dope lines....you could feel the energy and how you wanted it togo...very ill


You give brains to get A~HEAD and couldn’t even FORWARD a phone call.
And I rep VA like Very Arrogant Verbal Assasin.
While you rep an area code where they call you an asshole and has been.
There’s 2 type of m.c.’s besides me-on the M~.I~.C
Those with ovaries- and those that cram N.U.T’s in they ass cavaties.
That’s whyThe day I get signed im a spit nine and start billing-
My record label for the track and contract killing.


^^lol....very well writtin..flow i found hard but wen i caught it...went nicely with your words an multi's great lines

Ive been doing this since before the PONY EXPRESS-
Give me 20 minutes you’ll be impressed….
on how I address lines and deliver text to the world faster then fed~ex.
No Im not arrogant and this aint a complex-
But you say you’re the shit and I agree in a different context

Those bars were fucking ill as hell...the fed -ex line wa dope, and i felt that flowed the best...just cause it was nice to read and it had a great sence to it...good wordplay there

You like ALCHALICS ANONOMYOUS….when you drop bars-
Your groups congratulates you but nobody knows who you are.
I spar- with hooks and punchlines keep my my focus ample-
Then let rappers sample if we ever battle- grapple your adams apple-
And twist it off like the cap of a Snapple.

^^whoa lol..creativity was mad there...with the boxing thing and you being focused that was very unique...good multies there

Fuck hip hop!!!!!! this commercial bling shit got me anoid-
I stay fresh dressed rocken sean john but hate reject labels so fuck BAD BOY.
Fuck any cat that forgot what this is aboute-
So if you soft and say your hard hitten im knocking you the fuck out.
36 times one for each tooth in your mouth-
AND GIVE YOU A ROOT CANAL THE SIZE OF 95 NORTH AND SOUTH.

Great ending bars....i felt those lines really made you realize how hard lines can get...just because you said plus finished around it then...very dope...all in all very well writtin and the punchlines were dope...crazy flow and great metas man...keep it up peace

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

THNKS TO ALL OF YOU THIS WAS THE FIRST TIME I SPENT MORE THAN 40 MINUTES WRITTING TOOK MY TIME AND HAD A BEAT TO FLOW TO SO THIS WAS AN IMPORTANT DROP FOT ME .

word that shit was tight, my favorite line- You like ALCHALICS ANONOMYOUS….when you drop bars-
Your groups congratulates you but nobody knows who you are. not completely true, but it works in the idea that no one knows who you used to be. other wise, the flow was pretty on, and the hook was simple, but i liked that shit. thanks for readin' my shit though, your comments make me want to write more. keep droppin' knowledge