10 lines max
usual voting rules
both verses due 30 min after check in
good luck

this is my check in and im starting now.....
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Checking in
I'll drop mine now....

Rappad must have been a mispell, he's obviously getting raped//
Couldn't get a *grip* on this battle, if his mic was stuck to his arm with duct-tape//
It's a textual manslaughter, how I de-liver ill scriptures to crush his verse//
Delay the time, your only prolongin the ride in your hearse//
Dead on Arrival, as soon as he signed in he knew he was fucked//
Feathers-Flustered, like pigeons gettin smashed into by 18 wheeler trucks//
I'll hand you an 'L' like black jack dealers handin upside down sevens//
You need a reverand, couldn't be revived if Ghandi performed the blessings//
Ten bars and your done, You got caught pants-down in broad light//
Find a new place to battle, RB don't even want you in their sight(site)//

Your Leveled, I'm Laughing At Your Wack Attacks
Only When You Direct Movies Is When We Can Say "That's A Rap"
Like A Paralyzed Victim Walking You Don't Stand A Chance
Deep Couldn't Go Side By Side With Me If He Asked To Dance
This Kid Never Lands A Straight Punch When Throwing Tantrums
Cause His Hands Wander Like Toddlers With Michael Jackson
With My Lyrical Perfection, Beating Ya With No Second Election
Like A Frog In Science Class Kid Your Up For Disection
Deep Beating Me Is An Illusion, A Magic Trick
Only When He's Arrested For Raping Poultry Can He Say He's "Fucked A Chick"

whoa this was a nice ass battle the newbie came hard and with good punches both verses floed real nice i liked deeps openin line amd i liked rappads closin line this battle this was real close i had to read each verse 2 times but i think the newbies punches hit harder expecially his closin one im gonna give deep my vote

severe lyrics vs tek ppl drop a vote on that battle

lol ok w/e 0-1 uppin
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uppin...
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uppin for the third time.......blah
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Punches:Rappad
Flow:Rappad
Multi:Rappad
Personal:None
Vocab:Rappad
Wordplay:Rappad

Overal:Rappad

The noobie had a good verse but Rappad the mcuh better verse. those punches were pretty good. DeeP you got potenital just keep elevatieng and get better pucnhes.

Vote on this, finish it:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82042

wot tha fuk is demos talkin bout.....no personals? thats bullshit theres plenty.............
nice battle.......................
breakdown:---

punches,flow,pers,metas,=rappad
flow,slight punches,pers=deep

deep has now jus found an ill format but rappad beathim for punches...............................

vote=rappad

hit this..............
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81897

uppin.....(4)
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Aight lemme lay it down for ya. Personally I really like the newbies style. It seems familier....

Puncheseep
Floweep
Multi:Rappad
Personal:None
Vocabeep
Wordplayeep

In my opinion Deep took this one easy.

rappad killed the shit in my opinion

yo both verses were tight but ooks like the newbie has heat


he tiight

yo an if y'all wud vote on these wack ass battles off mine so they can be closed
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81877
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4023#post804023
and http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82245
thanks y'all

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