I was taught to be uneducated but I've always been willing and able to learn...
hopin' the tablez would turn...I tried to spread love to the world but all I got was hate in return...
then I tried to spread hate to the world hoping that I would get some love back...
but all I got outta that was barely enough cash for a bus pass...
puff puff pass...as I slide coinz down the side of my face just to see what 2 quarterz create...
enough to buy a 50 cent soda to symbolize that I was a day late and a dolla short of my fate...(buck 50)
when I die...I'ma be a ghost that floats in my tomb...
how can I visualize the road ahead of me when I can't see past all the smoke in my room...
don't shit where you sleep...so I was taught to piss in ya food...
you tryin' to move up from a Benz to a Ferrari?????? I'll give you a "boost"...(jack ya whip)
for me the only routez to happiness are rhyming, thieving, and drugz...
I learned to be cold hearted until I finally meet the heat of a slug...
never believing in love...until love is finally seen with my eyes...
I witnessed so many people'z demise through evil disguised...
that as I search for laughter all I hear is screamin' and criez...
school was useless...weed was the only thing that ever seemed to enlighten my mind...
I learned not to turn my back to family...cause they won't hesitate to put a knife through ya spine...(backstabberz)

ya know how I do...a lil' off the dome piece at exactly 4:20 am for y'allz viewing pleasure...holla...

clean your pm box i got 3 collabs

I was taught to be uneducated but I've always been willing and able to learn..
POERFUL INTRO INDEED ALOT OF MEANING I HOPE PEOPLE CATCH....

hopin' the tablez would turn...I tried to spread love to the world but all I got was hate in return...
then I tried to spread hate to the world hoping that I would get some love back...
but all I got outta that was barely enough cash for a bus pass...
puff puff pass...as I slide coinz down the side of my face just to see what 2 quarterz create...
enough to buy a 50 cent soda to symbolize that I was a day late and a dolla short of my fate...(buck 50)
POETICLY POSED AND ALSO STATING ALTERNATIVE FACT TO ANOTHER FACT NON OPINIONATED.
SELF DELEMA THAT CAN BE EASILY RELATED TO.

when I die...I'ma be a ghost that floats in my tomb...
how can I visualize the road ahead of me when I can't see past all the smoke in my room...
don't shit where you sleep...so I was taught to piss in ya food...
you tryin' to move up from a Benz to a Ferrari?????? I'll give you a "boost"...(jack ya whip)
for me the only routez to happiness are rhyming, thieving, and drugz...
I learned to be cold hearted until I finally meet the heat of a slug...
never believing in love...until love is finally seen with my eyes...
I witnessed so many people'z demise through evil disguised...
that as I search for laughter all I hear is screamin' and criez...
school was useless...weed was the only thing that ever seemed to enlighten my mind...
I learned not to turn my back to family...cause they won't hesitate to put a knife through ya spine...(backstabberz)

SEAMED TO REFLECTENT OF STREETS WITHOUT AND KIND OF POSITIVE ASPECT.
OUTSIDE OF ENLIGHTMENT LINE.
WELL COMPOSED I JUST THINK IT WOULD OF BEEN PERFECT IF YOU SET ASIDE A SEPERATE DELEMA BUT I ENJOYED THIS AND IT WAS WELL COMPOSED. I DON KNOW IT ALSO SEAMS KIND OF RUSHED THOUGH

it was kinda rushed...lol...this was just another one of my famous late night off the dome piecez...lol...but I enjoyed it...it's kind of a change of style for me ya know...I'm tryin' to broaden my horizonz or some shit...lol...

clear your box

didn't I do it already??????

no yo got to forum chat in our crew forum

I cleaned my box...I accently forgot to clear my sent itemz too last time...that's what was takin' up all my PM box space...

that was a good piece...i liked thw ordplay an your creativity on how you brouaght it about...it was a good aspect as well i thought...your vacab was good...everything seemed there for a 4 30 script lol...good piece lates

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thanks man...

damn it kidz...uppin'...

Yeah this peice was good, it was a good read i thought, your flow was good, a good concept also, your vocab was good along with your content, overall id say this was a good drop, keep dropping.

thanks for the feedback...

ummm...uppin'...

ummm...still uppin'...