Is this cool? I'm answering your callout. I think you said 10-12 lines, correct? If you want, check in and I'll drop first like you said.

Pale actin biblical cuz he ain't reached elevation.
You know he fears me like god, why he quotin Revelations.
Meetin his maker, and lovin me like I was his moms.
So after losin this battle, betta try quotin psalms.
Pale, it seems like ya Horse has completely come un-glued.
Cuz I killed ya here, so get ya birth certificate renewed.
This is way too easy considering ya interest is Nutrition.
Guess ya suck alotta dick on those religious missions.
So go tell the priest ya failed, got yourself dissed like Moby.
Maybe he'll 'comfort' you cuz ya got beat by a kid named Toby.

You called out and I accepted. I know you haven't checked in, but I'm hoping you'll want to fight back against my verse. If not, I totally understand seeing as how you never really agreed to this, just called out for it. So, if you don't want to respond, don't. I won't be offended that you couldn't answer it. Thank you for the opportunity, though.

sorry dude I know I have been online but been busy at work so havent been on the site.....Yea Would love to battle with ya.....let me hit this up in an hour (nice spit) on my lunch break. sorry for takin long I just didnt see it but I got you kid

(Steps up lookin pissed off and take off his wife beater tank top)

Ima streetsweepa' bleed-ya when I beat-ya into a fuckin seizure
then write a book wit your blood so I can fuckin read-ya!
That will fuckin teach ya to mess wit my flesh man thought you wuz da best man kid your just a freshman
I can tell ya doubt cause you spit like your mouth masterbated
a lot of build up but not much comes out
then rip outcha vocals so you spit outcha neck
so we hear your blood gurgle when ya do a mic check
Im da one who fits da bloody glove nigga slug nigga you'll get plugged nigga betta run nigga get the gun nigga
Bitch Im scary go grab a dictionary I just got literary and rhymed your obituary.

What!

(Pale Horse throws the mic down and walks out still pissed off)

I just bumbed a beat and shot that from da dome a lil pissed off not atchu but jus a bad day.-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Lets get to some votes------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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PALE HORSE, would you please hit this up with a vote:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81320

I don't have enough posts to vote on this or else I would.

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81897

hit this up.....................

now ima gonna give this pale jus for the fact that his punches caused more damage.........tobias had aight punches and flow and also wordplay but it was too nice........

vote=pale

flow=tie
creativity- tie
punches- tie leanin more towards pale
wordplay- tie
meta- tie
multiz- none really...

vote = pale

closest battle ever....*props* to both ya'll...hot shit from both you newbiez.....

errbody hit dis battle up plz.....FAIR AND HONEST VOTE...NO D/R...NO HATE!!!!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81559

thanx playa for da votes need more especially more poll votes
Uppin #2 100 characters 100 characters

Punches:Tobias
Flow:Pale
Multi:Tie
Personals:Tobias
Open:Tobias
Closer:Tobias
Vocab:Both

Overal:Tobias

I voted for Tobias because I thought his verse was better. It haad good structure and he had some mad personals in there to. I liked both verses but Tobias had the one that stood out more.