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Chek In's Due: Monday 9/22/03
Verse's Due: Wendesday 9/24/03

Good Luck & Make This Match The Illest!!!

Check Check. I don't plan on losing this one. Heh.

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Robert L. Rem
1986-2003

nor I . Sixteen?

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Sixteen is word.

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Robert L. Rem
1986-2003

Legendary? Hardly, son; Someone go console this faker
Before I leave Quoshunned quicker than old, adulterous Quakers
The Block was your repertoire. . Now you're empty since your faction's dead
You're only chance'd be to import groupies from your Emcee Interaction thread
It's Mathematics - Quotient says sum bastards thinks we're really equal
I soar while this loser crashes and burns faster than a Giglisequel
Arby's already slept on. . This fake-vet's merely extendin' the slumber
I'd look up Quo's digits; but then I recalled that Amend has his number
Philosophizing - I advanced; hell, transcended all his mom's solutions. .
While handing AxL Prose as many AMENDments as the Constitution
They say Quo owned UPN. . Kids tell me his words ate able panels
What an accolade - - He ran game on a third rate cable channel
It's my status, Quo. . Frowned upon, while your status is full blown
The old adage is flipped now, 'cause Quo's a rabbit in wolf's clothes
We hate, you - dirtbag! Now even his Barbie tikes have torn him
This vet stayed around too long. . We'll call you RB's Michael Jordan

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RB Kids think I fell off, but here's something that's true
They ignore the fact that if I fell, I'd only land on you
Just give up duke, It's over right here on the spot
Cuz I won't give this head a chance, but his dome a shot
It's either winning or losing, but either way you'll worship me
Cuz blah shitty blah shit blah. . . can beat G.Hod creatively
I don't think you're near as good as you think so hold-up
Because this kid didn't simply fall, he slipped into a coma
Leave ya face bruised, tongued tied and those wrists slit, bitch
& I won't knock ya skill, cuz there isn't much there to begin with
I'll leave ya twisted, kid shouldn't accept the upset
Ya net career is like Jordan's return: All hype, but still nothin but the net
ANd now I'm vexed, nothing less from a vet, yet ya future's dim
Kid doesn't just flip old name disses, he cartwheels and moonsaults them
Served ya up, cream of puff, bring on someone decent next
& I'd have used a G.Hod nameflip, but kid uses 9/11 for pity sex

......and that's what a real verse is like.

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R.I.P.- Epimetheus
Robert L. Rem
1986-2003

both verses were dope.
ill break it down.


Legendary? Hardly, son; Someone go console this faker
Before I leave Quoshunned quicker than old, adulterous Quakers
bad opener.

The Block was your repertoire. . Now you're empty since your faction's dead
You're only chance'd be to import groupies from your Emcee Interaction thread
lol, good lines.

It's Mathematics - Quotient says sum bastards thinks we're really equal
I soar while this loser crashes and burns faster than a Giglisequel
avg.

Arby's already slept on. . This fake-vet's merely extendin' the slumber
I'd look up Quo's digits; but then I recalled that Amend has his number
lol, good

Philosophizing - I advanced; hell, transcended all his mom's solutions. .
While handing AxL Prose as many AMENDments as the Constitution
ok.

They say Quo owned UPN. . Kids tell me his words ate able panels
What an accolade - - He ran game on a third rate cable channel
;lol

It's my status, Quo. . Frowned upon, while your status is full blown ......... dope, line
The old adage is flipped now, 'cause Quo's a rabbit in wolf's clothes
We hate, you - dirtbag! Now even his Barbie tikes have torn him
This vet stayed around too long. . We'll call you RB's Michael Jordan
played finisher^

RB Kids think I fell off, but here's something that's true
They ignore the fact that if I fell, I'd only land on you
good opener...

Just give up duke, It's over right here on the spot
Cuz I won't give this head a chance, but his dome a shot
ok.
It's either winning or losing, but either way you'll worship me
Cuz blah shitty blah shit blah. . . can beat G.Hod creatively
didnt rhyme well enuf. but nice punch...

I don't think you're near as good as you think so hold-up
Because this kid didn't simply fall, he slipped into a coma
avg.

Leave ya face bruised, tongued tied and those wrists slit, bitch
& I won't knock ya skill, cuz there isn't much there to begin with
lol.good line.

I'll leave ya twisted, kid shouldn't accept the upset
Ya net career is like Jordan's return: All hype, but still nothin but the net
bad feeding.

ANd now I'm vexed, nothing less from a vet, yet ya future's dim
Kid doesn't just flip old name disses, he cartwheels and moonsaults them
Served ya up, cream of puff, bring on someone decent next
& I'd have used a G.Hod nameflip, but kid uses 9/11 for pity sex
bad finisher.

very close battle. quo coulda had it. but didnt. the finisher was bad, his feedin off the jordan line was bad. a few lines fo filler, good overall but that hurt him.

ghod...had one or two filler lines, diff style, better vocab and personals...punches were better fromm quo.. ghods personals flow and vocab edged this one out however.

both of you had some real nice lines..

Arby's already slept on. . This fake-vet's merely extendin' the slumber
I'd look up Quo's digits; but then I recalled that Amend has his number


easily G.Hods best line..highlight of his verse..

the rest was nice but most lines failed to live up to the typical G.Hod level..



RB Kids think I fell off, but here's something that's true
They ignore the fact that if I fell, I'd only land on you
Just give up duke, It's over right here on the spot
Cuz I won't give this head a chance, but his dome a shot
It's either winning or losing, but either way you'll worship me
Cuz blah shitty blah shit blah. . . can beat G.Hod creatively

^very nice..better than 99% of the current RB verses...the rest was nice as well, but these lines are where your light shined.


despite lacking personals, Quo brought enough to the tabel to overcome G. Hod here...

although it was a valiant effort..

vote-Quo

Note: I didn't feed off his verse. We simply used a similar concept. Nice battle though G.Hod

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R.I.P.- Epimetheus
Robert L. Rem
1986-2003

Quo Took this,
his verse was no bullshit, just direct all the way through
A 'No fuckin about' attitude here,

RB Kids think I fell off, but here's something that's true
They ignore the fact that if I fell, I'd only land on you
^Nice opener...:-)

It's either winning or losing, but either way you'll worship me
Cuz blah shitty blah shit blah. . . can beat G.Hod creatively
^Lmao, personnally my fav line

G.Hod,
Your verse was good, but fell off at times,
i think you tried to be too complex,
Where as a simplier approach may have proved better

They say Quo owned UPN. . Kids tell me his words ate able panels
What an accolade - - He ran game on a third rate cable channel
^Lmao, funny as funk.

Overall a good battle, well worthy of the LLL
Props to Both...:-)

Pz.

Vote- Quo

Vote G Hod

This was a decent battle... both had some pretty decent punches
but i felt Quo came a little generic... G had some nice personals &
his verse was a little more wittier... Respect to both, you both came pretty nice... One

VoTe QuO

It was a great battle but Quo just start was blaZin
HoD had a few ok lineZ but i mean it just wasn't as
good as QuO'Z.

pZ

~uNo~

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i enjoyed this battle......nice verses from both of yall.....Quo came
wit some real nice punches....the closer was blah.....but through
out the verse i liked it..... G.Hod had some nice punches as well...
his wordplay and vocab was dope......i think he personally came
better than Quo...but not by a long shot....it was close but i'm
gonna go wit G.hod

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