10 lines check in,
i spit first

lets get it on

Aight Baby
Checkin~In
I'm Gonna Go Out Ta Eat
And When I Come Back
If You Dropped By Then
I'll Key Up And Post......

GoodLuck

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Ill slice threw ya `mind` like a `diamond` saw
I`m rhymin raw, ill de~`side` your death like eatin `coleslaw`(get it?)
you cant `hold ya ground` pound for pound u aint `holdin it down`
ill leave you lookin like ya avatar, outlined in white chalk on the ground
rip this head, blast you, ive `molded` ya style like `statues`
Like `coverin my mouth when I sneeze`, I got mad punches directed `AT'CHU`
like the `Allies` ima destroy ya `axis`, `kick you off the atlas`
Doc Rivers in training camp couldnt help you to work `magic`
Sonned ILLunatic you dead kid why you persist
Cuz I made you cry ya `I`s out till _LLunat_c dont exist!

::Opener::
My Lines Put Mary~Jane Fairly~Insane Cuz I Spit Cleary~In Fame
When I Spit I'm Always In~Game Cuz I Put You In~Pain
I'm Squashin Ya Spit Like Ya Clit On RB.com You Do Not Fit
Who Knows Maybe Ya Lines Are Bit But Ta Me Ya Lines Are Shit
See Girl You Only 18 Gettin Ate Clean Mary~Jane Juss Stick To A-Teens
Ya Got Merked On Ya 8th Scene And Now I'm Knockin Ya Slate Clean
You Gettin Ripped Cuz Ya Verse Gettin Flipped And Ya Title Gettin Stripped
Like In Hockey You Gettin Clipped This 18 Year Old Hoe Gettin Pimped
::Finisher::
Time Ta Finish You Off Maybe I Should Finish You Soft Like A Cloth
Livin A Short Life Like A Moth Fuck It You Have Been Deliverd Your 2nd Lost

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Vote-Mary Jane

easily, her punches hit harder, and she is cute, but thats not the point. She had better punches, the flow needs work, but all this quotin and shit gets me dizzy, so get rid of that but otherwise good battle, both stay up.

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Only God can judge me, Who THE FUCK IS YOU?!

yea she is, she can do me anyt----- oh ya right, battle, votin

MJ hit harder mos def......Illunatic had multis but no disses really, some of MJ disses came out soft, but she basically hit more harder on this one

yall both keep elevatin

Vote = MJ

dam good verse by mj...nice creative punches that landed well...disses were good....felt tha heat....wordplay was off the hook..

ILL came nice...did'nt hit as hard with punches...disses were good...was'nt that creative tho...

but to me mj had the overall betta verse....vote m-jizzle

sorry to bother ya'll battle...but umm...i need 2 links of battles u voted on...if u didn't kno about this read tha stickies with tha rules...

^^^thats a good rule man and a question do you have to post links before you spit or after













i ko'd mary

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3176#post813176

Theres 1 Link.............................................. ............

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3188#post813188

2nd Link.............................................. ...........................

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Vote=Mary Jane

Punches: mary
Creativity: mary
Flow: ILL
Style: mary
multies: Both

Mary i luv ya style girl itrs kinda like mine, but werk on flow girl you'll elivate
sorry i cant poll but could u hit this up babe

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82951

Why are you mother fuckers voting for her because she hot, but i mean clearly illunatic's punchlines hit harder..... I mean yeah, she is hot.. but thats a bunch of dick riders vote=illunatic