10-16 lines
usual votin rules
you spit now
ill spit aswell

check in.............

Aiight look:


When I spray, I become the artist, best known for vandalizin' the Board/
this masterpiece is tantalizin', coz my brand my rhymin', is RAW/
Whenever I write, you're struck wit awe, fearin' this God given gift/
I bring "images to life" and I "pictured you" being killed by a "visionist"/
Lyrically I'm supreme, so hot that I had to let off some steam/
I'll damage ya spleen so you contract a disease and say you died for ya team/
Lets quit the back and forth, fuck this beef on the net/
I'll verbally CUT YOU UP just so we can MEET IN THE FLESH/
I'll make ya depression manic, as I rep from the same side of the Atlantic/
there's less chance of you beatin' me, than a church that's satanic/

Yo we agreed to both spit yesterday. I know you were at work but so was I. Come on lets get this crackin' 10-16 lines.

Check It!!!

You couldnt monopolize the market if you were much Fowler, (uk joke he'll get it)
You couldnt drown me out if ya spits were much louder.
Listen up bitch your a pussy and im the dick,
ima fuck you right now and leave you with an itch.
Your think ya all that but you score zero in the game,
You couldnt fly high at this if you wrote it on a plane.
I just boxed you up and left you hanging like ya David Blaine,
Now ya stuck on Cypress Hill going insane in ya mambrane.
Ya froze like a statue now im shitting on you,
Now im coming at you hard i'll make you ill like the flu. (played, I know)

If you were sharp like track shoes you couldnt run me through,
I'll pot ya like a herb and drown you playing pool.

ok dude thats it, I went home so I couldnt drop so now im back at work boooooo!!!!!!

aight x took this wit his punchs thats the only edge he had on mon everything was even its gonna be a good battle vote x

Alright I'll break this down proper

I looked at both and thought that Mono was good, but his punches were indirect, and was too complicated, and this made his punches less effective....they wasn't too the point enough whereas X's were direct, straight to his gut and beat him........

Vote=XL

Basically just cos of the punches cos that' what battlin' is about..verey other aspect was rather equal so.....XL won, but only just

GOOD BATTLE....beats some of the weak ones that have been on recently

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sigs are for herbs...Thats why I got one!

I think XL took this battle with punches. Mono's was pretty nice but it was more like what was going to happen and not so much what you are. Disses are what you are and XL had more of that kind of thing. Please hit this battle for me in return. Thanks. My Battle

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yea i gotta give my vote to x cuz his punches jus hit harder and punches are the main thing in a battle that and personalls the wordplay was pretty much even but i think both of u need to elevate u prolly would a got my vote alot easier if i understood wut u were talkin bout in the openin line lol

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=severe+lyrics

in the uk we have a soap on tv called eastenders and there is a famous family called the fowlers who a market stall and have been in the show for years and years.......

uppin dis shit.............................................. ......................dont d/r and dont let it sleep, remember to poll.

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ait here it goes

good battle both sides

punches-mon
flow-mon by a grip!
structure-xl
metas-xl
personals-mon

overal-mon
nice one fellas