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10-01-03, 01:06 PM
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quick, its not up to my usual skills
IP: 00E4 CAB9
Catch a case from this emcee with sublimianal criminal backrounds
i reign supreme in ya visual, do like 50 and back down most emcees keep a book of rhymes, but i'm a vet wit boxes like i'm punchin you out, but i mean rhymes in boxes quick to leave you on ya back, like criminals gettin caught by the boys in the blue, have ya rights stripped and lossed aross the car you tossed, put in cuffs, they wisk you away the hood love you but they pray for the day a bullet hit ya heart, an ambulance'll take you away |
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10-01-03, 01:17 PM
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IP: 1B6B AD68
Hahaha, this wasnt bad actually, it flowed nicely, good wording, nice direction and transition in this, it could of useda few more internals & multi's to spice it up a little but it wasnt bad, a little on the short side but ehhhh, from whats there it was pretty good.
Props. 
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10-01-03, 03:08 PM
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IP: 9B91 D0C6
i thought it was a alright spit, thick the flow went well, but it looked abit unfinished.........overall decent..........
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10-01-03, 03:10 PM
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Got More Meds Than Pfizer
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IP: C7EE 0184
i hope it isn't up to your usual.. lol... it was a'ight... what else can i say.. 1
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10-01-03, 04:15 PM
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IP: 6FDC 23CB
Yeah this was a pretty good piece, good read i thought, your flow was good through out the piece, your content was good as well, your vocab was pretty good, overall id say it was a pretty good piece, Keep dropping, and if you get the chance check out me and Gene Pools Keystyle, much appreciated, thanks.
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