ok here rules 5-10 lines
no biting/no recycle/no crew votes/no dr
Explained votes or no vote count
3-0 ko or first to 5 wins

ima key style this shit so ima be up soon hollaz
verse up my 1 hour or no show

OK Let's Start With Dis Fake Abc Rapper i'll put the Gun~To~His~Mouth........
It's Like He Got's Jesse Owens Under His Toungue Cause He Keep Running~His~Mouth........
You Beating Me is Snow White's Grumpy(dwarf) With a Grin........
No Wonder You Call YourSelf That Because Cause Your Chances of Winning are SLIM..............
You Ain't Ready For The Kid With the Gun Dat Will Bust Like Celebet Nuts.........
And Leave Ya Bones Out Like Elephant's Tusks...........
And Remember That What I Spit is Ember.............
Battle is over and i ate u up with a Keystyle Now please Hit the Wackness Center

why you want to battle me when you've got nothing to say

and ya know I'll spin ya words up cause I'm like twister tha game

so why step up just to get nocked down when you play

your rhymes are like speed limits they're verry restricted

an every time I come out I'm breakin you I dont give a fuck about a ticket

My trigger is more sensitive than your whore when I told her I wouldn't fuck her no more

even if you stayed up to write everynight an challenged me to everyfight you'd still end up with no score

hope your ready "Hit" cause your about to eternally sleep

this stupid pussie wanted to battle so I burried him deep

VErses Up People Start to vote now please!!!!!

Hollaz

what did ya think hit............................................... ........................................

aiight
flow:V A slim
structure:V A slim
personals:none really???????
metas:tie
wordplay:Hit Panik


my vote:Hit Panik, i jus thought he came a lil bit harder than slim, but netherless, a good battle


hit this up peeps:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82352

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neither of them were really impressive at all... but I think Hitpanik came with a little more battle material than VA so vote goes to Hitpanik

did va really stand a chance....he had tha most elementary flow on the board to date....be more creative...

hit had betta punches...disses hit iight... overall betta verse...

vote hit!

My vote is to V.A. Slim based on the fact that his was more mature than the ova bol's verse. I can't stand that kiddish shit.

Vote+ VA Slim

Now y'all niggas hit my battle up (in the sig) and drop and honest..return the favor

uppin this shit for votes come on ppl............................................... ................

V A slim had thnice wordplay, but HIT took it wit harder punches, better flow, nice structure etc


nice battle but y'all need to elevate a litle



http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82876
hit this up

peace

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Alright:



Punchlines:Hit
Flow:Hit
Structure:Hit

Overall:Hit

Hit this up y'all, with an honest vote.............................

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82645

Thanks, it's gettin slept on and it's pissin me off............................................VOT E ON IT AND GET IT ENDED SO I CAN BATTLE

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sigs are for herbs...Thats why I got one!

4-1 uppin and if ya votin fuckin post in the poll too not only a explained shit funny how a newbie voted for slim ha

im not gonna try to explain everything cuz both came wack, really really wack, i know both u could do better, u just need to think up some shit

Flow- Hit
everything else - hit just cuz VA said some bull shit thru out his whole verse, and everything was played out and shit, but its not like hit did great or even good...

Vote - Hit... by default, both of yal need an english book

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