Masta C: This girl has me loving and hating her at the same time
The Realist: I know what you mean... let it out man

The Realist
When you tell me you love me, is feeling it an abomination
I'm Living Only for Vivid Endings, that isn’t an abbreviation
When you were in a rage told you don’t engage in adulteration
My feelings only connect cause you’re my project of beatification
Getting the Purple Heart award cause my hearts core is in conflagration
I'm living a strife crime like the kind seen as a Life Time dramatization
It’s not a lack of enunciation, but seeing you with me is a hallucination

Masta C
Everythings always riding on what I-say, I guess I can have things my-way, but im tired of-it..
People telling me secrets, saying they love me but don't mean-it, don't you just love-shit…
Always telling me what's wrong, up all night with them listening to songs, and solving their problems..
I get involved too much, cant get my life back in my clutch, cause what was bother them, now I got'em..
And I just don't understand, we held hands, you said I was your man, apparently it meant nothing..
We sat in the car, and look up in the night sky at the stars, but the whole time you were bluffing..
You told me things you told no one else, I was always there to catch you when you fell...
I only cared for you, no one else, cause I was always there to make sure you felt well..
Spending countless hours, found out you wanted one single flower, just one red rose..
Now I got the key to your heart, but its just so hard, when people ask me for it, I just froze..
Found out you liked another guy, I wished it was a lie, cause it hurt so much on the inside..
But I didn't show the pain, I just stood in the rain, recapping all the things that you lied..

The Realist
Why am I here to just give advice?
Will I spend life looked at twice?
You feed me your emotions, can I bite?
I can solve your problems, be my wife

hey leave us some feedback on this piece if you check it out, its much appreciated, thanks.

AS EXPECTED

^^^ huh?

my bust twin it came great i like your style and i cant find negativety so i am short on words masta did well and complimented it very well with a diff diversity

this piece was ill,tight vocab, tight multis, tight imagery, tight wordplay and tight rhyme scheme, all in all nice piece,keep droppin tha hotness.~1~

Masta C is my idol! He has beaten me at 3 battles..but he still amazes me!
Hes smooth beats and word phrasing it excellent!
I would work on some more choice of words..but other than that, it looks great! Keep up the good work!!!!!

thought it was tight dawg, likin ya flow, vocab, infact it was all good.....................keep spittin dat shit!!!!!!!!

think i might try a colab, never done one yet

yo masta c had some tight muties in that the whole piece was dope.... sounded very deep.... the realists first verse was cool...
I'm living a strife crime like the kind seen as a Life Time dramatization
It’s not a lack of enunciation, but seeing you with me is a hallucination
that was ur best part realist......
yo masta c i think this was ur smoothest piece....
And I just don't understand, we held hands, you said I was your man, apparently it meant nothing..
We sat in the car, and look up in the night sky at the stars, but the whole time you were bluffing..
...i think that u 2 dropped a very good...deep...piece here...
i liked it alot....props to ya both.....keep dropin....

Hey guys thanks for the feedback, keep it coming, its much appreciated, thanks.

real tight verse u guys, u both collabed well and realist, tight ass vocab and flow man, I was especially feelin ur part in this collab, and masta C u had a real nice use of multi's and ur rhyme scheme was pretty good. but props ta both of ya's keep up da droppin.

and as for a note I'll be postin up my open mic called "ways of life" like within a few minutes so if u could kindly please check it out and leave some feedback it would be much appreciated. thanx in advance peeps.

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Nice and deep piece, gentlemen...

Was kinda confused by the ending...

Like, huh?

But the rest was tight as shit.

Good flow, great imagery, nice content and story.

Insane multi's at the beginning.

Very cool.

Overall, 8.5/10

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err first off....
realist ur verse was very basic...a long word at the end of sentences didnt do ur writing any good
the flow was pretty off...not internals or multies to help it keep going
verse didnt really grip me at all...seemed like u put very little effort into it

masta...yours also flowed poorly...same bad points as above..u need to shorten your bars
your verse though at least seemed to have some meaning and thought put into it which made it all right to read
once again though didnt grip the readers attention
both lacked wordplay and imagery in their verses
and the chorus didnt really do much for it either...
keep posting...

no love... but thanx for honesty fgee
uppin... and thanx to Gene Pool and Born to kill