Hook:
True thugs rock clips in mid-day~
pop shit~hot spit//

cereamac weapons use to penitrate bitches~
tek~uzi~bitch none of yo shit can move me~
dun even faze me~
just delays me~from popin dis C (Crip)~
dissin me like i even kno who u b~
street diss~u aint shit- from SUBURB thinkin u hard~
nigga u need to quit huggin the cock in slang in da yard~
shit im loco~im vato~my matto~
'ho's b4 bros' u go first nigga~
nigga thinks he can listen to N.W.A and be a G~
fuck nigga i heard Dre, fucked EzE and got H.I.V~
go hit it Mr herpy~suckin da cock like it a 7-11 slerpy//

Hook:
True thugs rock clips in mid-day~
pop shit~hot spit//

i got semi autos to finish off Taft cliq~
couldnt get yo supply on da street with me~
u aint dun got any dirty dirty shit on yo back u just sloppy~
even if i u pushed me off a buildin~u still couldnt 'drop me'~
pop me? (na) thats like killin Bart Simpson cant happen~
get yo dick back in the white boys ass start tappin~
clap yo sisters ass im slappin (oo)~shit even against 12 yr olds im strappin~
u run yo mouth u gon feel my heat enter ur body~
fluids entered like it was pregnacy test~fuckin wit da best~
messed~stressed~shit im pissed~when i spit bullets i missed~
yo girl was swollin the feelin was over reelin~i could stand still and ud still miss//

Hook:
True thugs rock clips in mid-day~
pop shit~hot spit//

aint got no O.G in yo 'crew'~
u got a F.A.G tho~the chief and his faction~
gon be havin some interaction~faxin his way~
only paper i got his to roll up~
i might be spittin to fast so ima slow up~
lemme get it for yo dumb ass~
*talks like a retard* slass~grass~pass~mass~
i just rapped like~nigga thinkin he can flow rhyim cat and hat~
well bitch IMA Kick in ur door~shoot ur whore~and leave u red on yo bed~wit lead on yo head till u dead// (OOOO SHIT)

Hook:
True thugs rock clips in mid-day~
pop shit~hot spit//

*talks* fuckin wit a thug, u must be a dumb fuck~ADD nigga that must be the reason u popin shit at me...
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True thugs rock clips in mid-day~
pop shit~hot spit//

that was weird to me for some reason a hook doesnt look like that in my eyes

your peice was nicely put together soem work went into it you can tell

good drop pay back the favor and peep stalkin *the links in my signature*

Yeah this was a pretty good piece, it was a decent read i thought, your hook should be a little better, but your flow was pretty good through out the piece, content was good, overall it was a prety good piece, keep dropping.

and if you could return some feedback..
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thanks for rep nigga.. the hook wasnt that good but thanks for the rep 1

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Aight...

Not too bad of a little flow here...

Vocab wasnt bad..

Would like to have seen a deeper topic...

But overall: nicely put together...
Decent drop..

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