Iight..

10 Lines Max
No Crew, Hate Or D/r Votes
No Bitin/Feedin
Due: 30 Mins Afta Set Up

Chekk
G'Lukk

iight this is ma check in ill have ma shyt up in a bit.........1

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lemme revise this verse..and keep repeatin how Im gonna eat you/
some say fuck alcohol...cuz all I needed was a round to beat you/

this kid wanted to test, claimin he's rugged, flow leather/
now he represents Plastic Surgery... he Nose Better/

With this battle, mos def your sure to struggle/
cause I don't gotta cut your dick off to prove Urine Trouble/

I'll replace those pimples on your face with hot shell casings/
then stomp your face till it looks like a Picaso Painting!/

i Knock u out come face me n ill portrait ur ass, get Framed/
shove an Empty Cash Register up your Ass" cause ain't SHIT CHANGED!/

waitn for artik................................lets go

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iight..srry i'm a lil late..

Time to beat this Kid, and so this will be More-Of-A-Winnin'-Streak
I've heard ya Timid-Speech, ya just not touchin' much Sorta-Like-A-Midget's-Reach

This Kid actin' like he Birthed-The-Site, I'll "cut ya wrong" like a Clumsy Surgeon-Might
Always clamin' ya Verse-Is-Tight - Ya like an over confident Zebra, Still Thinkin' Ya Earned-Ya-Stripes

when u read what i verbalize itll burn-ur-eyes
u couldnt bust any knowledge if ur sperm-was-wise

***Finisher***

The hall of fame's Strippin'-Ya-License cuz´ ya not Spittin'-The-Nicest, and I'm Beginnin'-To-Like-It
Better get Equipped-With-A-Sidekick - Think ya winning? Better change ya thoughts Like Manipulative-Psychics


DONE!

Good battle this is a tough one but i think Artikqlit took this one from this line:

This Kid actin' like he Birthed-The-Site, I'll "cut ya wrong" like a Clumsy Surgeon-Might

Good battle all in all Work on your finishers!

iigh iight.............

wut time is it

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VOTE TIME........LETS GO................1

Nice Battle

Break down

Wordplay: mos deff execution
Punches: execution
Flow: both
multies: Ark
Metas: execution
personals: execution

Execution, ya had alot of nice wordplay, sorta weak, but sorta sick at the same time, just elivate

A dawg u need to start tryhin more, thats all i gota say i know ur better


Can u gusys PLEASE hit his up, its gettin slepped

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83338

wordplay - artic
flow - artic
structure - xecution
punches - xecution
personals - none
enjoyability - TIE
vocab - artic

Overall - VERY CLOSE battle and too ok verses, but articQlit takes its by doing better in more categories

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UPPIN . . .

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lets go people stop sleepin drop votes........

leave links..........1

let it be dun^

Not Much Of An Explanation..
..But I'll Give U It..
uppin (2)

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