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IP: DC8B D3E1
eyyo, LSA mothafuckas im fueled like propane
niggas try to fuck wid me bu i sting like cocaine im at a fuckin point where opium cant numb the pain Im like X nigga ill put a fuckin whole in ur brain ive spent a lot of time pushin dem drugs dt fuck wid me unless u wanna get clapped by a thug trees, O, Khat i have an obbsesion wid flowers cuz they can get my bombed worse than the fuckin trade towers if u dt buy I annoy u liek a date that dont shave Then i Cop some E show up late at the rave take chances wid me.. get shot in the face take chances wid weed.. cuz my shit is laced i keep the hazed glazed on the PCP ill take a razor blade and chop ya E-Y-E If ya wanna feel good boy i got some rocks dt be scared cuz the way i cock them glocks we got mad trees, malt liqour i have a party mad ppl rollin b-40s laced wid bacardi LSD, LSA, Mushrooms, Dex i love the euphoria when im rollin on X wehn i sip on some becks suddenly i want sex i got the E to fuck wid peoples heads and play a good trick like a youngteen blonde wanting marlyn mansons dick i got drugs that fuck wid ur head so bad make u lookin 4 gold like u was sinbad ill have a nigga rollin just like limp biskit or have a nigga dissapointed cuz he dint wanna risk it so u should no by now i do lots of drus and have lots of thugs, who back me when shit get ruff come to 1 my partys where ppl rollin on X ud think u the best ud get lots of sex and drugs, doh, homies whats lifes all about pop a pill, drop a O nd im out tha was my debut freestyle-- Drugs----- tell me what u think payce |
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IP: DC8B D3E1
come on sum1 reply
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IP: 1501 77A0
ummm wack wack wack
elivate, u had no flow, no meaning to this elivate |
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IP: DC8B D3E1
i dint mean reply from u ive seen ur shit u ct reply
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IP: 65A6 08E6
Please give up rap
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Light Weight
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IP: 6D0E 69D5
personally i don't take on this topic cuz drugs and thugs only wreck lives... but i will prop the flow, i don't think it was bad at all... i think you need to take more time to structure a verse, BUT if this WAS a free then i say mad skillz, boy, mad skillz
hey don't rhyme x and sex twice and oh yea... Is this said in 2, 3 or 4 lines? cause it read really badly... "i love the euphoria when im rollin on X wehn i sip on some becks suddenly i want sex" {Peace}
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IP: DC8B D3E1
iite note taken
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