And within the depths of the universe, a spirutual entity was born from the darkness. However, one single malfunction of the orbs caused twins. These twins where however split into the two parrellel universes. There was Creator, and there was Destroyer

(Creator = Italic)
(Destroyer = Bold)



On the first day I spoke, the world appeared,
Remarkable, only water, no land as far the eyes could reach.


On the first day, I'll begin using the worst play
Turn the earth's crust plates and cause earth quakes


On day two, I made the firmament and decided,
to divide the water from water, and keep it united.


On the second, I'll curse the holy blessings
And break the universe's lightbulb with my holy weapon


On day three,I changed my mind , merged the water and called them sea's.
wit one move of my hand, the ground appeared and I called it land.


Time for the third, as I exert tidal waves over the earth
And submerge all the tree's beneath the waters deep surf


Put scientific laws in place, create the sun on day four separatings of day and night,
and the moon, plus the stars, to separate the dark from light.


Prepare for the fourth, as I pop the sun with my fork
And eat the moon's cheese with my teeth and my own jaws


On day five, incredible examples of beauty in life,
birds and sea creatures, protectors of the land and water divide


On the fifth, I'll tip toxins deep within the water mist
And submit chemicals to the birds, death torture sick


On day six i almost created everything living and breathing,
Humans, but also feelings , hate, love, so retrieving.


The sixth day, I'll ricochet a thousand ultra-violent rays
Which gives chase to humans, and leave there flesh frayed


On the Seventh day , the world was on to its best,
creations were there, the world was build ,time for me to rest.


On the seventh, I'll sneak into heaven where gods resting
And pour poison in his ear, so he can hear my death message

OMG this was creative and unique and just WOW

On the second, I'll curse the holy blessings
And break the universe's lightbulb with my holy weapon


^ set up the scene nicely and lets us kno the plot


On day six i almost created everything living and breathing,
Humans, but also feelings , hate, love, so retrieving.


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my fave part ....makes me think HEY I WAS OF THOSE THINGS HE CREaTED

great peice guys

especially thug

thanx for the reply hazy.b.

still upping on this though :d

hey pay back the favor if ya would the link is in my sig lol but the post is right below ya

nah what i mean i go recruit a poet or two to come n peep ya ish

holla

Damn...This Was A Nice Piece...Imagery And Flow Was Good...Vocab Was Good...I Liked How You Said How The World Was Created In Seven Days And Also How Each Step Was Created...How It Was Destroyed...Ill Piece...

Keep Dropping Them...

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Pretty original, I'll give ya'll that.

Nice deep meaning, good imagery.

Kinda made me feel old, like I was watching Clash of the Titans again.

But very nice, and again, very, very original.

8/10 for mostly concept.

Vocab was good and all, complexity well done.

But the idea behind it was the best thing about it.

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thanx for the replies, hazy ill reply to you 'ish

upping this though lol

Up^^

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Good concept...

Havent really seena nything like this...

Good imagery...
Nice simple flow...

Good drop
Peep
SS Verse: Starlight

^^^thanx ( lol )


still upping on this.

Very artistically done.


Great work on turning around the whole idea of dialogue. Used terminology affected mostly to what was the concept heading..

Incredibly one of the best collabs ive ever read. Labeled title was brilliantly thought out.

It was nice people coming up with new ideas on writing especially the style accompanied with passion from the beginning to the end.


Breaking down this is a must but the fact that i havent got the time to do it....but definitely written well and very inspirational.

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Wow.. i can see it now


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The Bible: Hip Hop Version lmao


erm.. real original tho props.. it cudda done with a twist @ the end.. and maybe sum more wordplay, but good shit none the less, real deep and affective
liked Thugz deepness and Ayura's creativity

shits jus creative basically.. unlike my feedback.. oh well

good shit!...1

this shit was fucking hot, yall did it madd good togehter,
thug: real tight flow, good meaning real hot...
Ayura: holy fuck man yo shit was mad hot ....
u earned my fav line:
On the seventh, I'll sneak into heaven where gods resting
And pour poison in his ear, so he can hear my death message

Nice drop holla...