flowin this to the "Lose Yourself" instrumental.

Verse #1:
comin out so hard, to break the walls of charge/
it’s just to decently demandingly strenuous to hold the applause/
I look left to right, feelin in the mood ta fight/
but I ain’t got the rights, to put out the strife/
life begins to unfold before my eyes, the final moment, just before I die/
then suddenly I realize, all the things that I despised, I never gave room to let it step aside/
I pray to the light, but it gets casted away for my will to survive/
selfishness got me feelin deprived, left behind, cuz my ignorance has got my in a bind to see with a blinded eye/
“say goodbye”, were the last words I heard before the end of my time/
no pleeding for life, not even a tear to shed through the thick sheet of ice/
that chilled to my spine, stabbing at me like a thousand knives/
and I’m only 25, so fuck life, cuz it ain’t to no ones surprise/
when u hear the click of the gun, and u don’t even get the time to run/
it’s just POW! It’s over, and u done/

Chorus:
life made easy inside a world of dreams, but every time u wake u see a killer inside the body u use to breathe/
to eat and sleep, whether or not it’s meant for keeps, but the deals sold cheap/
so just give into to peace, down under 6 feet deep, believe bitch in u and me/
cuz the ground doesn’t sink that steep, when ya on ya knees, ready to end ya life, before u plead, then afterwards u bleed/

Verse #2:
livin out life, as a bum without even the energy left to make a run/
a dash for love, is somethin that’s been forgotten and long lost/
the glamour and gloss, of the rap festivals at which I used to show off/
but that’s before I got blew off, and boo’d off stage, cuz the trip was to much for me/
and then suddenly it hit me, chronic nose bleeds from snortin to much coke and smokin cheebs/
which sent through my brain a lyrically challenged disease, ended up almost killin me/
an with that, I blew my whole career cuz I was a big time druggie, and that was just before I turned hardcore junkie/
sold the rights to all my songs, so I could just shoot up that heroin just little more/
and soon enough, I ended up, broke as fuck, always tryin ta get the cops ta lock me up/
a place to crash shop from those cold winta nights, cuz it’s a fight to survive/
in this world of crime, ppl like me are diein all tha time, without a reason why/
and ppl don’t give a damn, cuz they just turn away and walk amongst their own path/


Chorus:
life made easy inside a world of dreams, but every time u wake u see a killer inside the body u use to breathe/
to eat and sleep, whether or not it’s meant for keeps, but the deals sold cheap/
so just give into to peace, down under 6 feet deep, believe bitch in u and me/
cuz the ground doesn’t sink that steep, when ya on ya knees, ready to end ya life, before u plead, then afterwards u bleed/

Verse #3:
I’m sick of livin like this, in this world of lies and bullshit, 17 years old, and already I’ve blown it/
threw every chance I eva had for somethin good, straight out the window now I’m livin it up in the hood/
beatin kids for tryin to play their stupid tricks, or act like they jackin this/
but all they get back is shit, an a motha fuckin pistol whip/
and I’m just sanely going insanely crazy, I can’t handle this cuz my gf left me with my hand around my dick/
for killin some punk bitch, that I had a gun fight with, and beta yet I took a bullet in tha side of the ribs/
got hospitalized because of it, and took off as soon as they covered it/
I just couldn’t wait around, for the pigs to bust me now, there’s no way I was gonna go out like that to the pound/
so my only choice was to take my own life, straight down to the ground/
got home, and popped back half an ounce of magic mush ta help me bounce/
help cope with the pain, the massive amounts of horror that I was suffering/
tripped out so much that I soon found myself stuttering, I couldn’t help myself/
when I started to scream for help, but the only thing, that came to my aid/
was the 9 piece I had left in my school bag, so I pulled it out/
and sent a cap straight through my brain, finally something to ease the pain/

Chorus:
life made easy inside a world of dreams, but every time u wake u see a killer inside the body u use to breathe/
to eat and sleep, whether or not it’s meant for keeps, but the deals sold cheap/
so just give into to peace, down under 6 feet deep, believe bitch in u and me/
cuz the ground doesn’t sink that steep, when ya on ya knees, ready to end ya life, before u plead, then afterwards u bleed/

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I know it's long guys but please read through it and leave me some feedback cuz I would really like to know what u ppl think of this piece. thanx in advance.

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This was a pretty good drop man, it was a long read but it was pretty good, it flowed pretty well through out the piece i thought, you had a good rhyme scheme too, your content was good, overall id say this was a pretty good piece, keep dropping.

come on ppl just uppin this to try get some feedback so please leave some it would be much appreciated. thanx in advance.

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THATS A NICE DROP DOG

STICK TO WRITING SONGS U'LL ELEVATE

thanx for the feedback man it's much appreciated. lookin for some more so come on peeps lets get some feedback up in here.

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well i read it once, then i read it again with lose yourself playing

yours sounds better with out the song, my opinon...
flow was on and off but its easier to spot with the beat
i say you should have dropped this in audio, it would have probably fit better

good drop none the less, and thanx for the feed on me and masta c

Its That Simple

thanx for the feedback man and np. keep it comin peeps.

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man this was a good drop... I couldn't have done better myself. Everything is awesome and I will have to write a song fo ryou to give feed back on but till then you should give me feedback on my lost love. But awesome drop, keep it up and yo'll elevate!

uppin this for some more feedback and thanx for the feedback already. keep it comin. thanx in advance. peace

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it's a nice drop man, liked it, felt it

keep droppin em gems

thanx for the feedback. uppin this for some more. keep it comin thanx in advance. peace.

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nice drop homie i felt it ......propz