i like the spit the verses, with multi sylable words,
but still like to keep the ill metas, like, 'i fly like a bird'/

but u gotta throw some punches, like a boxers do to bags,
an if ya english, i rape ya like michel barrymore, does to fags/

then ya gotta throw in the personals, but, not gonna diss myself,
because if i did, i'm like sydromes, detremental to my own health/

michel barrymore, is an englis star who threw a party, an (he's gay) a young lad (also gay) was found in hs swiimn pool, wit alootta XTC in his ststem, an he'd been raped????????

It was alright, pretty good flo', i couldnt really catch tha topic tho'.
Pretty good for first one.
Just practice and keep droppin'

{Love}

aiight thanks,
can i get some more feedback

yo it was aight fo ur first...english jokes are old tho..... good flow.. an vocab was aight...yo keep droppin....peace