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Old 10-07-03, 09:02 AM   #1
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Axe E. Um VS Camarac

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Check In Due: Wendesday 10-08-03
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Old 10-07-03, 09:51 AM   #2
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Old 10-07-03, 06:14 PM   #3
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Old 10-09-03, 03:44 PM   #4
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^Liar.

Axe E. Um aka Ambiguous. .

this kids piss poor at Audios, & theres no beat he can flow ta,
Tried to Lay his vocals . . but they gave him the cold shoulder!
the shows over, so Brace it Near before i go Erase this Queer,
i got Cam tatooed on my fists, just to let you Face your Fears!
Your wasted here, fuck ugly, how you gonna show me up, G?!
losing Suits You, cuz u stole ya name from a Clothing Company!
shown no love to C ? well thats ok, and honestly, i aint fazed. .
"his alias / did he bite / he's better at topical / i'll call him gay"
^ each of those 'personals' are played. . im stating facts dude
and if you use another 'Camera' line - ima take Shots at YOU!
theres not a lot you can do, id beat you w/o tryin regardless. .
& i aint Lost Respect For You. . i didnt have any to start with!
Cam's heartless, you arent an artist, why u even here w/ me?
Your dope, and No One Can Take You, . . Take you seriously!
You real as me?! Hahaha! . .Your nothing but a joke of a Toy,
such a Small Fry that mcdonalds want you as their Posterboy!
i'll roast this kid, then toast ur ribs 'fore telling you "Get Shut"
Cuz the only thing worse than your punches, IS your set ups!
u dead fuck, this week im gonna leave u Controversially flawed,
and then Tongue In Cheek. . once i uppercut this slut in the jaw!
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Old 10-11-03, 02:33 AM   #5
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^Hoe Moe.

Cam’s ‘Bout To Get Plastered… ‘Cuz I’ll Ensure To Crack His Fill…
Leave Em Black And Blue, Yellow And Peach Like The Newest Jackson Bills
Ghostwrite For Meth, Recycle For Himself… These Are Cam's Rules Of Thumb
No Hostility At All… Extend Cam The Olive Branch, But To Hang Him From
Cam Struggles More With Fresh Punches… Than E-volve With His Spellin'
Stays In The UK… ‘Cuz Here Fruits Can't Elope Unless They Got Melons
Known To Visit Sperm Banks… But For Withdrawals, Not A Deposit
Cam's Claustrophobic… The Excuse For His Escape From The Closet
"You're The Greatest!" They Say, He's Thrilled And Excited By Friends
And I Don't Mean Smack Down When I Say Cam Got Killed At UPN
Threw His Hat Into The Ring, To Prove He Comes Off The Dome…
Punch This Winbag In The Stomach, Now All His Chances Are Blown
Recycled Punch… Blah… Recycled Punch… Blah… Recycled Punch… Edit
^Cam's Post Summed Up In One Line… When’s This Bastid Gonna End It?
Style Is Old, English… And Within Days We'll See The Fake In Thee…
I Would Lodge My Foot In Your Ass… But Faze Has Filled The Vacancy
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Old 10-11-03, 05:09 AM   #6
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Vote deleted...
Not in league

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Old 10-11-03, 12:04 PM   #7
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Vote Doesn't Count... Kid Not In The League... 0-0, Can We Get Some Votes Please?
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Old 10-11-03, 12:31 PM   #8
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Errr.. Im In The League But Don't Got A Battle This Week.. Im Bored So I'll Vote Anyways..


Cams Verse...

this kids piss poor at Audios, & theres no beat he can flow ta,
Tried to Lay his vocals . . but they gave him the cold shoulder!

decent..

the shows over, so Brace it Near before i go Erase this Queer,
i got Cam tatooed on my fists, just to let you Face your Fears!

Nice.. Feelin It.

Your wasted here, fuck ugly, how you gonna show me up, G?!
losing Suits You, cuz u stole ya name from a Clothing Company!

Good Personal And Punch

shown no love to C ? well thats ok, and honestly, i aint fazed. .
"his alias / did he bite / he's better at topical / i'll call him gay"

No Punch, But Good Creativity And Personal.

^ each of those 'personals' are played. . im stating facts dude
and if you use another 'Camera' line - ima take Shots at YOU!

Very Forced Yet Decent Bar

theres not a lot you can do, id beat you w/o tryin regardless. .
& i aint Lost Respect For You. . i didnt have any to start with!

Coulda Reworded It Better.. But Good Bar.

Cam's heartless, you arent an artist, why u even here w/ me?
Your dope, and No One Can Take You, . . Take you seriously!

Solid Punch.. Good Multi As Well.

You real as me?! Hahaha! . .Your nothing but a joke of a Toy,
such a Small Fry that mcdonalds want you as their Posterboy!

Kinda Played.. But I Didn't Like This One.

i'll roast this kid, then toast ur ribs 'fore telling you "Get Shut"
Cuz the only thing worse than your punches, IS your set ups!

Dope Setup And Punch.

u dead fuck, this week im gonna leave u Controversially flawed,
and then Tongue In Cheek. . once i uppercut this slut in the jaw!

Erm... Decent But Not A Great Finisher.

Overall I Really Liked Your Verse, It Showed Us Once Again Why Your One Of The Top Heads On The Site. Some Solid Multis, Good Punches, And I Loved The Originality Of Your Verse.. Keep It Up Man..

Ambys Verse...

Cam’s ‘Bout To Get Plastered… ‘Cuz I’ll Ensure To Crack His Fill…
Leave Em Black And Blue, Yellow And Peach Like The Newest Jackson Bills

Erm.. No

Ghostwrite For Meth, Recycle For Himself… These Are Cam's Rules Of Thumb
No Hostility At All… Extend Cam The Olive Branch, But To Hang Him From

Ok Pretty Good.. But It Seemed Forced.

Cam Struggles More With Fresh Punches… Than E-volve With His Spellin'
Stays In The UK… ‘Cuz Here Fruits Can't Elope Unless They Got Melons

Best Bar In The Battle Hands Down..

Known To Visit Sperm Banks… But For Withdrawals, Not A Deposit
Cam's Claustrophobic… The Excuse For His Escape From The Closet

Setup Bar Was Played, But The Punch Hit Hard.

"You're The Greatest!" They Say, He's Thrilled And Excited By Friends
And I Don't Mean Smack Down When I Say Cam Got Killed At UPN

Lol.. Clever And Hard Hitting.

Threw His Hat Into The Ring, To Prove He Comes Off The Dome…
Punch This Winbag In The Stomach, Now All His Chances Are Blown

Dope As Fuck.. Likin It..

Recycled Punch… Blah… Recycled Punch… Blah… Recycled Punch… Edit
^Cam's Post Summed Up In One Line… When’s This Bastid Gonna End It?

Funny And Good Personal..

Style Is Old, English… And Within Days We'll See The Fake In Thee…
I Would Lodge My Foot In Your Ass… But Faze Has Filled The Vacancy

Damn.. Talk About A Finisher.. Props..

Overall Your Verse Was Dope.. Kept Me Reading And Even Had Me Laughing Out Loud At Parts.. Your Personals Hit Hard And the Wordplay Was Ill.. Props On That Verse.


Overall This Has Got To Be One Of The Best Battles I've Read.. And I'm Nominating It For RB Legends After I Post My Vote. Both Of You Came Hard And Really Had My Attention.. This Is A Very Very Tough Decision.. But I Am Gonna Vote For Amby Here By A Ballhair... Literally.. Thanx For The Good Read But No Thanks For The Hard Vote...



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Old 10-11-03, 12:34 PM   #9
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Axe...u came back nice....good wordplay and u had some good
punches in there...i have nuthin to hate on....just let u know
good work.... but ... (i know).......cam did own this battle...
kid threw sick wordplay...disses...and everything at u.....it was
a nice verse....i could beat it.... .....but anywayz.....this was a
nice battle. Good job to both


vote=Detonata....i mean Camarac
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Old 10-11-03, 02:22 PM   #10
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Old 10-11-03, 02:28 PM   #11
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^i know u ain't Detonata...it was a joke....*cough* STB....*cough*
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Old 10-11-03, 02:29 PM   #12
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Cam took this one...

Axe came nice...
But had some played concepts in there...

So based on orignality and quality of punches...
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Old 10-11-03, 02:42 PM   #13
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Hot battle, but it was definetly cams
amby had a few nice punches and sum decent wordplay
but he lacked the consistency that cam kept throught all 20 lines
Cam had a lot of dope lines that had me roll'n
props to both
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Old 10-11-03, 04:02 PM   #15
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^Of Course... Anyways... 1-3, Lookin For More Votes... Knew Cam Would Win This Regardless... Just Wanted To Put Up A Fight.
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