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Old 10-06-03, 11:07 AM   #1
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Old 10-06-03, 03:25 PM   #2
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Old 10-06-03, 07:26 PM   #3
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Old 10-09-03, 08:06 PM   #4
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ight..

Look gee, you got no life.. its suttin you gotta nack for..
Loompas Fuckin wit him cuz you got crews in his sig..... spelt backwords..
lets get inta It.. why diss artiqlit n' his crew ?..
dude, either Bizzurks on crack.. or scroll down the roster, hey look, its you !..
Ya screwed.. face it ima win it, and its more than a hunch..
you suck, why you even bother.."in" was ure most humorous punch..
Ya lucks erupt.. was lookin for a fight but its only fgee.. dont need to prepare for him..
Bare his skin.. i'd throw sum shwartenzaggar punches but.. he's not even american..
this aint fair for him.. he sux so i dont know what all the hype is..
he's scared to fight this.. so he runs off.. and blames it on laryngitis..
Jesus christ bitch.. and now we gunna see who best fits the regime is..
Not that u need it.. me, believe it.. put an audio track on him
and rep.pl..lay.. replay the sequence,

** Fgee Cant Beat Auspicious, Stick To Dreaming**
 
Old 10-11-03, 12:28 AM   #5
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my barks worse than my bite...leave u knocking boots man
dont get excited u fag...i mean when my timber-lands
leave u facially enhanced...i'm a morse typist the loss is over in a flash
S.O 'S your reputation ....trashed...rocking regimes gear..well fuck i'll literally give u a throw back!
foe cracked..i'm not talkin beds....Auspics known to get testi when he hits the sack!
face the facts...your rec's a result of beating new members
but 59 wins a head ...ur quick to blow like Jenna jamesson's temper
am i battling myself?...same style of verse...no!...im not wack
kid lacks the mettle of class...call me aluminium the way i foil your 'attack'






 
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Old 10-11-03, 08:19 AM   #7
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Whoo.. Damn Fgee.. Didn't Think You Were
Gunna Show There For A Min...
Lets Get Sum Votes On This..
 
Old 10-11-03, 09:41 AM   #8
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fgee's verse was ok, a couple of stretched lines some ok wordplay but nothing that impressed me or made me think ooooh

auspicious' verse was ok too, i seen him come harder but he still dropped a good verse, his structure was a bit better but there was still a couple of stretched lines, his vocab and multies were better and his punches hit a bit harder.

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Old 10-11-03, 10:26 AM   #9
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Auspicious- You had a pretty good verse, but it was full of weak punches..."you're on crack"..."oompa loompas are gay" that sorta stupid shit. Nothing really stuck out to me, made me laugh, or made me think "shiet, that was dope!". Your flow sucked, and that isn't good. Okay wordplay, but it didn't really hit hard enough.

Fgee-Your verse wasn't that great either, but it was better. You wordplay seemed more thought out, and it was easier to understand. The Jenna Jameson line was funny as fuck, if a little played out. Your flow also needs working on. Pretty good, man.

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Old 10-11-03, 11:52 AM   #10
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Aus., came decent wit his punches and wordplay and what not..
but Fgee came harder and stronger wit his. Good battle but i'm
goin wit Fgee.

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Old 10-11-03, 04:11 PM   #11
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VOTE - GEE

Both Verses Were Kinda Weakk
But Gee Came Harder . . . Aus
Threw Out More Punches But They
Din't Hit Hard...Fgee Lacked In
Numbers Of Punches Thrown But
His Shit Hit Harder . .. Ok Battle
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Old 10-11-03, 04:28 PM   #12
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Blah... I've Seen Better From Both... Neither Threw Punches That Hit Hard... But Fgee's Hit Harder... The Aluminim Foil And Jenna Jameson Punch Are What Took It.

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Old 10-13-03, 08:31 AM   #13
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Vote fgee

Basically what everyone else said... Aus your verse WAS a little
played.. fgee didnt come great but he did connect a little better &
was a little more original.. just a little

fgee Wins
Aus Loses

Battle Closed
 
 


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