first off.....
centz is what? centz is who?
you only pissed off cause im not bitch made young pup fuck you !
im the illest with lyrical hiku's-
abuse herbs with verbs you can tell by the bruise.
i misuse ego's- that are not equel-and kill in sequels-
this what i do.let you live long enough to kill you in prt 2.
say what?.....i bit mine-from who's rhyme?
you fag mimes- can perform double oral like hemaphrodite in 69's-
all you do is just bite and suck at the same time.
im ahead of my rolex while you a broke casio behind-the time.
i dont give a fuck...i refuse to conform -to being norm-
my FLOW form- HARD enough to film PORN of me busting HAIL STORMS.
you want proof? my ripping stints- where just hints-
of how in this game im one of a kind like every mans finger prints.
illmattic with every hymn that i design-
make your career coarse and life force align-
parallel...acapell-2 sentence equalling 2 flat lines'.
this is my biography........
divine with metaphors~ im~ how raps biblically define?
if you didnt bite, why your verse sounds like mine-played it in rewind?
you dick riders want to act like me................aight fine!
but you will have to giveup some brains to get in my mind.

hook:2 keep hopen
3 get you hope broken now start coapen.
4 we leave you broken with your bones spelling dont fuck
with an omen

5th off.....
aint shit aboute me soft-anyone can get served,
from my skillz to the werds i cough- im hot and exhaust- molicoff.
non centz the type to guzzle a gun muzzle-
fire shots lyrically...physically charlie horse your leg muscles- cramp hustles'.
im known to do on microphone what close chrome does to bone.
shatter yet splatter your subject matter-shit on you with your own blatter=
my writters block headaches register 8 on earthquakes...i leave you feeling the disaster.
it started with singers taking actors jobs...in an instance-
now we got commercial gangstas taking real thugs buissness.
but im neither of these-so dont believe-the rumors-
my job to bless you like i just sneezed.-leave you in tumors-
squeeze-m.c.s' for royalties at 50 percent finance fees-this is FOUL HUMOR
i'll take HALF your CHEDDAR .<guess who just CUT THE CHEESE.>
please you cats is all that....but thats,,, nothing in rap ~so you a zero in fact-
your not at my level...murder and plead a lower~case then i kill you with CAPS.(capitol)
how you gonna tell me i cant i aint real or act-
like you dont lack the same things you claim i lack -
then have the nerve not to expect me to react.
when i do my impact-shows you getten beat on beat like heart attacks.
i just present~ed the gift for you that's a w~rap.
you cats stay weak you dont battle to be tighter ITS A VICIOUS CYCLE-
you battle weather to find if your garbage or recycled.
thats why i look at you critics like lame hoes in bed-
cause you blow-retarded like your slow~ in ~the ~head.

hook:6 you not knowen
7 we knowen your head is the bomb so start blowen
8 we get dick rode in heaven cause even the virgin MARY
cant front on an omen

Damn! that is the best piece I've seen here in open mic yet. You're a genius man. That is the perfect piece, it's classic material. You are on top of your game partner. Keep it up!

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What the fuck is this?

marry me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
id make a great dihonest cheating asshole husband...lol
thank you ma i hope others will see it the same

Its was an alright piece, need some rhyming on parts if that wut u wuz tryin to do.


when i do my impact-shows you getten beat on beat like heart attacks.
i just present~ed the gift for you that's a w~rap.
you cats stay weak you dont battle to be tighter or for tittles-
you battle weather to find if your garbage or recycled.


^^I cant find tha rhymes here if you wuz even tryin ta rhyme^^
Keep droppin
{Love}

when i do my impact-shows you getten beat on beat like heart attacks.
i just present~ed the gift for you that's a w~rap.
THEY RHYME OUT OF CONTEXT AND YOU AND I BOTH KNOW YOU HAVE TO DO THAT AT TIMES

Flow was fast and tight...The structure did lack but i feel people would feel your flow more on audio...Well unless they pick it up...I've got used to it and it was a good read...You stayed on topic nicely blah blah...The intro was nice aswell

Pz

what you mean pop please tell me i liked this

I did like this piece aswell...I said your structure did lack and that can't lead to people not following your flow...But i thought the flow was great...Content had me hooked throughtout...

If that isn't explained enough..hOlla

Pz..

lol it is im just a perfectionist and you one of the most trusted people i have so i ask you harder then others

damn dude i was feelin that, after readin ur other shit i found the flow easy to catch onto, but i guess it depends on the reader, the vocab and wordplay were good as usual, and i didnt see a problem wit the rhyme scheme, i dunno what k dubb was thinkin, but whatever, good shit dude.

peace......

UPPIN AND THNKS

HOT SHIT!!! no Doubt

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