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Thugz: Life Hyped
There aint much but here are a few examples that make me hyped, expressin my self with the tru me, without lyin no more need to hide. At first fear was controllin me,can i show what i am to the people surroundin me?, shall i just present the fragile me,or represent with my alter ego's and just let it be..? Or show people just the way i am the real me , ..........it mades me wonderin deep down inside, always i was drownin,stuggles wit me self, is it possible to show 'me' not harmin my pride Questions surroundin,hard decisions,effectin my future in life wishin i could get rid of all of it, hyped tellin people ive hurt, i'm sorry,but its destroyed so badly theres no chance of doin it?. I made the things to were they are at this point, do i need a miracle? to make a real switch, make it all un-done, straighten up my mind , body and soul.. Come closer every day of reachin my goal..? Or is it tru everything u face in life is just a mirror, all the pain,is cost by ur self..?, u need to work on ur own happyness,take control,do somthing about it,u cant take it of a shelf. Its possible , ..but hard, ..i would do ne thing to get a fresh new start,sunlight instead of rain, its really gets me hyped ,all the nights i prayed for just that chance for that one change to gain. Potent:Hash Hitting Hysterically Yeah..I'm hyped up for a fight tonight to whup some ass Can't describe what i write..punches Invite puns of hash I never cum last like randy males..I never planned to fail Plans follow through like they sheeps and I'm lil Bo Peep Should I only speak on November 5? To show fire works Hype keeps me from drift..so i don't expire and go bizzurk I'll retire my dirt if the deserved hype doesn't preserve life What?.. Hype keeps my life going instead of inerd cyphe That disturbs sights..So im forced to face the reality of it Got to stand on hoards of yellow pages to be level with it I search scripts to be an expert in spit..Examine my glands My heats trying to be ventelated cuz i'm hanging on fans Bragging cuz i can!! This text signifies how happy i am Happy Hype Hoards
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This was ill... Lets see hwat y'all think...If you a vet, hOlla with soe advice on how to improve
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wow this was a good piece of work from u 2....
poteinet and tdc, u were both consistent and both of u satyed on topic obverall good shit my spellin is bad tho good shit i rate it an eight
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Thnx for the feedback, ...hyp
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Cmon peeps dont sleep
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That was ill...The vocab was on point and it was very well structured. TDC, you opened yours very well and I loved your last line. Pot1ent you had a very nice flow. You two complimented eachother nicely. I was definitely feeling it. Good drop.
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dirty sally said it as it s.
iu cant really add to that ce[t that pot1ent you comen up twin im mad proud to see that |
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Thnx
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^^up
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Uppin..Thanx
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