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Old 10-05-03, 10:54 AM   #1
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Thugz: Life Hyped

There aint much but here are a few examples that make me hyped,
expressin my self with the tru me, without lyin no more need to hide.

At first fear was controllin me,can i show what i am to the people surroundin me?,
shall i just present the fragile me,or represent with my alter ego's and just let it be..?
Or show people just the way i am the real me , ..........it mades me wonderin deep down inside,
always i was drownin,stuggles wit me self, is it possible to show 'me' not harmin my pride
Questions surroundin,hard decisions,effectin my future in life wishin i could get rid of all of it,
hyped tellin people ive hurt, i'm sorry,but its destroyed so badly theres no chance of doin it?.
I made the things to were they are at this point, do i need a miracle? to make a real switch,
make it all un-done, straighten up my mind , body and soul..
Come closer every day of reachin my goal..?
Or is it tru everything u face in life is just a mirror, all the pain,is cost by ur self..?,
u need to work on ur own happyness,take control,do somthing about it,u cant take it of a shelf.
Its possible , ..but hard, ..i would do ne thing to get a fresh new start,sunlight instead of rain,
its really gets me hyped ,all the nights i prayed for just that chance for that one change to gain.


Potent:Hash Hitting Hysterically

Yeah..I'm hyped up for a fight tonight to whup some ass
Can't describe what i write..punches Invite puns of hash
I never cum last like randy males..I never planned to fail
Plans follow through like they sheeps and I'm lil Bo Peep
Should I only speak on November 5? To show fire works
Hype keeps me from drift..so i don't expire and go bizzurk
I'll retire my dirt if the deserved hype doesn't preserve life
What?.. Hype keeps my life going instead of inerd cyphe
That disturbs sights..So im forced to face the reality of it
Got to stand on hoards of yellow pages to be level with it
I search scripts to be an expert in spit..Examine my glands
My heats trying to be ventelated cuz i'm hanging on fans
Bragging cuz i can!! This text signifies how happy i am

Happy Hype Hoards
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Old 10-05-03, 11:27 AM   #2
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This was ill... Lets see hwat y'all think...If you a vet, hOlla with soe advice on how to improve
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Old 10-05-03, 03:06 PM   #3
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wow this was a good piece of work from u 2....
poteinet and tdc, u were both consistent and both of u satyed on topic
obverall good shit

my spellin is bad tho

good shit i rate it an eight
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Old 10-05-03, 04:48 PM   #4
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Put reply and no doubt i'll return tha favour!!
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Old 10-05-03, 06:00 PM   #5
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Thnx for the feedback, ...hyp
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Old 10-06-03, 07:23 AM   #6
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Cmon peeps dont sleep
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Old 10-06-03, 07:54 AM   #7
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That was ill...The vocab was on point and it was very well structured. TDC, you opened yours very well and I loved your last line. Pot1ent you had a very nice flow. You two complimented eachother nicely. I was definitely feeling it. Good drop.
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Old 10-06-03, 07:57 AM   #8
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Old 10-06-03, 11:50 AM   #9
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Old 10-06-03, 12:19 PM   #10
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dirty sally said it as it s.
iu cant really add to that ce[t that pot1ent you comen up twin im mad proud to see that
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Old 10-06-03, 03:28 PM   #11
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Old 10-07-03, 09:29 AM   #12
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Old 10-08-03, 09:51 AM   #14
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