12 lines
no feeding
no crew votes or d/r
explain um

DUE SUNDAY 11:59 PM
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This Liars Vexed.....Aquired Text Are Wired And Flexed And Why Must I Face These Minor Vets?/
Bullets Hit Your Spine Or Chest....It's Done For You Cuz Your Getting Fucked Over Tha Net Like CyberSex//
Put Grip Pliers To Necks...I've Been Tha Best Here But You Hope For Change And Pray For Fortune/
Audible’ll Stay Scorchin.....Cuz You'll Think I Had Church Instruments Tha Way I Play With Ya Organs//
Your Lame As Fuck!....You'd Think I Was Mind Blowing Tha Way Ya Brains'll Bust/
High Off Angel Dust....I'm Different....Cuz It SeemsYou've Choked On All Ya Drops Like Strangled Nuts//
I Mangle Fucks...Bruise This Dood...Cuz I Often Have talks Of Swellin Ya Ass Like Lettin Hemroids Speak/
I Spit Noise G....Cuz Your Close To Gettin Pissed On Like Toilet Seats//
Avoid Tha Reach....Stop Frontin...Cuz Like Mufasa's Brother This Bitch Gonna Scar/
My Shits Along Far...Why Do I Battle?....Cuz I'm Elevated And Your Feet Still ON Tha Ground Like Driving The Flinstone's Car//
My Sights Been On Star!!.....Audi Leaves You Plugged Period...That Outta Stop Ur Queef/
Let Shots Release To Knock Ya Teeth...Bitch I'm Never Slipping...Cuz All My Punches Are A Combination Like Boxer Breifs//

yo nice rhymes man............................................... ......................
i'll be back later to check out audibles rhyme

aight peace out for now

brixtons****************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** *******

this is ma chek in..........i'll key wen i can be bothered..pz...................................... ...*********************************************** *************************

Come on BRIX you always on this shit.......................
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AIGHT IMA HERE.Ima not gonna be nomore...i finally got paid.pz
now listen......

This Chumps Rhymes Are Explicit?...There Damn Near Plausible,
Nobody Takes Note Of His Shit...So They Gotta Be In-Audible.
Coz They Ain't Fired Punches...Jus Made Up,Old Tale Hunches,
Tryin To Feed Of Ma Wakest Line,Like Pot-Heads On The Munchies.
D.Mindz Sure To Be Crumbling,So The Wakest Of Them I'm Humbling,
Makin Sure I Leave Humpty...Bone Dead & Lyrically Tumbling.
Yakade Yak,Fuk The Yak Pak...Like Im The Boss Givin U Tha Sack,
So Pak Ya Bags...And Go Gather Some Feeble Skills That U Lack.
SO CAL IE?...So What?...Boy Thinks Sunshine State Makes Him Hot
Your Like Chlemidia..Soon To Rot,Jus Like Big L In The Alley...You Been SHOT!!!

*Sorry to big l in that line
pzzzz
there ya go...let the votin begin

audible you have a choppy flow and you abused the 12 line bar limit....


This Liars Vexed.....Aquired Text Are Wired And Flexed And Why Must I Face These Minor Vets?/
Bullets Hit Your Spine Or Chest....It's Done For You Cuz Your Getting Fucked Over Tha Net Like CyberSex//
^ Good On The Multis But A Played Concept, Why Do I Feel Live I've Seen This Before?

Cuz You'll Think I Had Church Instruments Tha Way I Play With Ya Organs//
^ sick line

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-Brixton-
This Chumps Rhymes Are Explicit?...There Damn Near Plausible,
Nobody Takes Note Of His Shit...So They Gotta Be In-Audible.
^ Origional and Ill

Coz They Ain't Fired Punches...Jus Made Up,Old Tale Hunches,
Tryin To Feed Of Ma Wakest Line,Like Pot-Heads On The Munchies.
^ LMAO.. funny but not that strong

D.Mindz Sure To Be Crumbling,So The Wakest Of Them I'm Humbling,
Makin Sure I Leave Humpty...Bone Dead & Lyrically Tumbling.
^ OHHHH (thats a wrap)



vote= -Brixton-


Why?

Because....

Structure-Brixton
Flow-Brixton
Punches-Tie
humor-audible
vocab-Brixton


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Audible is a biter...i've got proof:
http://www.nobodysmiling.com/forum/...id=61451&page=2
^Check Yungmenace's spit menaces verse was posted on 10/29/03 and audibles verse was posted on 10/31/03.Biter!!

i totally disagree with divinity on this one.
audible had a dope flow with multies which livened up the punches greatly.. while there wrent punches everywhere, there were multies that livened up the verse.. multies were missing from brixtons verse. brixtons verse didnt really have many punches.. filler mostly. sure, there was filler in audis too.. but there were multies in his filler. and audis punches stood out to me as less played and more interesting.

vote- audible.