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Old 10-08-03, 01:36 AM   #1
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Am I the Anti-Christ??????????

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A track me and my boi A-bomb dropped in my studio last night...
the chorus was pre-written, but the verses are freestyle...
enjoy... (this track turned out great, I layed the beat and we went off...
wish I was able to let yall here)

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could it be????..... (A.T.)
nah, it couldnt...... (A-bomb)

<chorus> (A.T. and A-bomb)
Am I the Anti-Christ?... could it be?
Am I the Anti-Christ?... nah, it couldnt be...
Am I the Anti-Christ?... just wait and see...
Am I the Anti-Christ? <<<< (echoes to a fade)

(A.T.)
Could it be...
I'm the one supportin abbortions and extortin divorces,
Importin drugs and exploring pre-marrital intercourses...
of course this horse shit aint gonna amount to a quarter,
Beware of your daughter cause I'm coming out to whore her, (Sarah!!!!!)
this is just another horror flick and I'm adjustin your set,
I'm disgusting when I spit just to give you the physical effects, (blahhh!!!)
the visual of this metal pistol pullin criminal delivering-
subliminal threats to another individual just to be left for dead... (ohhhhhhhh)
These two dangerous, enraged, insain slaves come to deliver you,
Kill you and let your soul be tormented too,... (ahhhhhhhhhh!!!)
me and my sidekick bomb gon' show you how we blow up fools,
so sit back and relax and let this A-Bomb drop like it was World War 2...

(A-Bomb)
the dirtier the deed, the more fun it is to me,
I get satisfaction from watchin all these bastard cats bleed, (*gunshot*)
I cause clinical disasters with a passion for lyrical master peices...
Causing witty distractions as A.T. dowses your house,
& leaves you gaspin and wheezing... (*deep breaths*)
We the magnificent two...aint nobody more evil... (u what bout lucifer)
Matter of fact dawg... hit up that chorus so we can spark this shit like ether. (explosions)

<chorus>
Am I the Anti-Christ?... could it be?
Am I the Anti-Christ?... nah, it couldnt be...
Am I the Anti-Christ?... just wait and see...
Am I the Anti-Christ?...(echoes till fade)

(A-bomb)
we some back stabbin, rack grabbin, demon-seeds hatchin, (crack)
Cap blastin, rap battlin, demon seamen, drug dealing addicts...

(A.T.)
who says that what I say aint some shit to be feared,
I'm listenin to this from a bitch who says the same shit-
to himself in the mirror??? (you suck)

(A-Bomb)
nah see,
We got these supremisist runnin shit and it aint fair to half the nation,
So me and A.T. put in this collaboration in honoration of our dear slim shady... (chica, chica)
see everybody curses, fights and even points the finger...
and these steaming critics get pissed and tell Eminem that he needs to censor music,

(A.T.)
My terminalogy isnt that of your average cat, (really???)
I blast lyrical gats at whack mcee's such as my boi A-Bomb...
and with a quick lyrical diss at the end of this shit,
I'ma finish my spit as the end of this song... <A-Bomb yells: *sucker punchin bastard*
hahahaha

(chorus)
Am I the Anti-Christ?... could it be?
Am I the Anti-Christ?... nah, it couldnt be...
Am I the Anti-Christ?... just wait and see...
Am I the Anti-Christ?...( echoes till fade )

in dedication of one of the most hated on rappers out there...
this is to EM.
we out...................................
(beat Fades)
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Old 10-08-03, 02:18 AM   #2
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I love all the feedback Im gettin ^^^
I just need a few more...
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Old 10-08-03, 02:39 AM   #3
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haha...nah this was a tight piece...i strongly doubt it was a freestyle though...the vocab was good...flow good but a bit shaky at times....when u say freestyle u mean like a normal freestyle...like vocal and shit...????
if it is then u should be world renowned...hha nah not that much
but solid structure and aight content


feedback please on this...id hate for it to get slept on

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84172
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Old 10-08-03, 12:11 PM   #4
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it was freestyled... but the first verse was mainly recycles I've
remember from past battles and shit....
but the chorus was done before the verses and the backgrounds
were done after.

still uppin.
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Old 10-08-03, 07:04 PM   #5
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its a cool drop tho, it was good

dont think im wierd but when i was reading the chorus for the first time

the flow i got from it sounded like "White America" by Eminem

White America!!!.....I could be one o' yo kids
White America!!!.....Lil Eric looks just like this
White AMerica!!!....Erica loves my shit
....

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Old 10-09-03, 12:44 AM   #6
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come to thinkk of it... the chorus is kinda similar,
didnt mean for it to be... plus when we did our chorus...
we wasnt yellin... lmao
thanx for da feed.
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Old 10-09-03, 01:45 AM   #7
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i was feelin that dawg, that was hella tight for a freestyle, the wordplay and vocab were both good, the flow was on target, the topic and content were pretty damn original, keep droppin dude, ill be lookin for ya.

peace......
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Old 10-09-03, 02:02 AM   #8
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yeah....sorta like most freestyle's on the recycled shit......but dont forget to feedback on my shit dude.....i hate shit getting slept on
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Old 10-09-03, 03:27 AM   #9
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aight yo it was hard to see ya flow at first but i see how it goes now-------looks like it culd be a hot song--the chorus is aight--------probly have to hear it though it just looks like that sort of a song------beats gotta be bangin----good spits by both i jut thought they culd be more sicker and deadlier anti-christ type spits----but it's all good---good drop none the less------oneeeee
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Old 10-09-03, 12:11 PM   #10
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lovin da feedback
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Old 10-09-03, 12:27 PM   #11
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man, there's no way it was a freestyle for one, two stop try'n to be eminem and come up with your own style, i agree this was a good piece, had some sick vocab an' multis... but damn, if you ever want to make it you can't sound like eminem... if you recorded this why ain't it in audio's.. i want to hear it...

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Old 10-09-03, 12:45 PM   #12
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I dont have it recorded on a computer... we did it on an old
timy 4 track recorder you dumbass... this is my style... aint
eminems shit...
**talks to himself... dont get pissed. he just givin you feedback**
alright....
what the fuck... I just seen this guys battle record ^^^ ... lmmfao
maybe you should learn a lesson from me... like how to WIN battles...
**slaps hands over mouth before he says more**
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Old 10-09-03, 12:47 PM   #13
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and it WAS a freestyle... like I explained up ^^^ there...
"most" of it was recycles I've used from battles that I remember.
sorry for the uh... out burst ^^^... i appreciate the feed though.
no beef,
A.T.
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Old 10-09-03, 12:51 PM   #14
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lol... my battle record's from text battles... i'm an audio mc, an' can't battle in text if my life depended on it, mainly 'cause all these textcee's wouldn't know good flow if it was a clean cut to their jugular... frankly an internet battle record means shit to me anyway, so good looks bro.. and there is ways to get a 4 track onto a computer... just to let you know
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Old 10-09-03, 12:53 PM   #15
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can ya tell me how... sorry for all that shit up there... im a bit
antsy today...
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