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Old 10-11-03, 02:51 PM   #1
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"the rise of Jimmy"

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yo! how many mutherfuck'n people that you see is fake
how many mutherfuck'n people will do whatever it takes
to rise to the top no matter what's at stake
there's only a chosen few that's considered to be great
well now you got the chance to add my name to the list
i did what it took no matter who the fuck got pissed
had to step on peoples toes just so you can look at my shit
and if you didn't like it, fuck it! i still kept drop'n the hits
you really can't denie that i ain't the best in this bitch
these little pussy's is just rookies.......drink'n my piss
like i said, i took chances........to risks to prove shit
mutherfuckers didn't like it, so what! i'm used to it
you really think Jimmy wasn't gonna come back strong
i came back home so you people could feel these songs
these here is gonna have be the realest to the bone
i've shown who i am, you cocksuckers is wrong
and i'm wish'n for one of you faggets to stop my flow
fuck throw'n bows, i'm a just throw a shot to your throat
for even think'n that i'm bite'n off what EMINEM wrote
but it's pathetic that people wanna critize your shit
try'n to tell you need to change a bit and write like this
some of these people is nothin more then hipicrits
try'n to be critics when you need work on your own shit
and this is only being dished out to the ones with bad intentions
so please don't get it twisted if your names not mentioned
i don't want people say'n i sound like EM and i dont
just listen, you'll see why i don't allign myself with chumps
i'm a keep my fuck'n name at the top of this game
and retain the title i worked hard to gain
and maintain my status, you bitches done had it
you just lost it, now i done captured it
and threw that other shit in my closet
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Old 10-11-03, 02:55 PM   #2
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I like this. Except for tha drinkin my piss part. I mean god. How can anyone think of ppl doin that. But other than that, nice shit. Peep my open mic

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84793

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Old 10-11-03, 03:07 PM   #3
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that wasnt bad for a newb especially, the vocab and wordplay were pretty good, try and make ur structure a little more complex next time, but ur content and topic were pretty played in my opinion, so work on that next time, but u got mad abilitly homie, keep droppin

peace......
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