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10-11-03, 02:51 PM | #1 | ||||||
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"the rise of Jimmy"
IP: C1DA C961
yo! how many mutherfuck'n people that you see is fake
how many mutherfuck'n people will do whatever it takes to rise to the top no matter what's at stake there's only a chosen few that's considered to be great well now you got the chance to add my name to the list i did what it took no matter who the fuck got pissed had to step on peoples toes just so you can look at my shit and if you didn't like it, fuck it! i still kept drop'n the hits you really can't denie that i ain't the best in this bitch these little pussy's is just rookies.......drink'n my piss like i said, i took chances........to risks to prove shit mutherfuckers didn't like it, so what! i'm used to it you really think Jimmy wasn't gonna come back strong i came back home so you people could feel these songs these here is gonna have be the realest to the bone i've shown who i am, you cocksuckers is wrong and i'm wish'n for one of you faggets to stop my flow fuck throw'n bows, i'm a just throw a shot to your throat for even think'n that i'm bite'n off what EMINEM wrote but it's pathetic that people wanna critize your shit try'n to tell you need to change a bit and write like this some of these people is nothin more then hipicrits try'n to be critics when you need work on your own shit and this is only being dished out to the ones with bad intentions so please don't get it twisted if your names not mentioned i don't want people say'n i sound like EM and i dont just listen, you'll see why i don't allign myself with chumps i'm a keep my fuck'n name at the top of this game and retain the title i worked hard to gain and maintain my status, you bitches done had it you just lost it, now i done captured it and threw that other shit in my closet |
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10-11-03, 02:55 PM | #2 | |||||||
Middle Weight
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
I like this. Except for tha drinkin my piss part. I mean god. How can anyone think of ppl doin that. But other than that, nice shit. Peep my open mic
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84793 And poll whachu thought of it. |
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10-11-03, 03:07 PM | #3 | |||||||
Banned for being stupid
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IP: 95C5 EAD6
that wasnt bad for a newb especially, the vocab and wordplay were pretty good, try and make ur structure a little more complex next time, but ur content and topic were pretty played in my opinion, so work on that next time, but u got mad abilitly homie, keep droppin
peace...... |
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