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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

alright im checkin in, a better topic than last week.

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It doesnt matter if you win as long as you give everything in your heart

- michael jordan

I am gonna be what i wanna be, but not just what i wanna be but what i am.

- 2hot2handle(myself)

It feels like heavy machinery is comin down on top of me~
its crushin me and feels like i wont live for tomorrow~
feels like gettin shot by an arrow that fills my heart with sorrow~
bleedin my internal organs with rupture~
the structure is crumblin and cant lift no more~
machinery is explodinwith spark causin the conflagration to the core~
burnin the building from top to bottom~
flames everywhere and feels like the devil has come for a visit~
heaven? where is it? not existin right now~
just witnessin peoples vision of misery now~


How can this happen, what did i do~
i did nothin but live what i believe is true~
cant believe this is occuring right i speak~
it seems like it has got a leak~
that is comin between the creak or a hole that is decaying the soul~
the passion that we held has come out to stumble~
to rumble what tries to interfere to cause fear and shit that we hear~
cant realize what the future will hold~
death or life, hot or cold, bought or sold~
what will occur in what we have ye to see~
perfectly or messed up to fuck with me~
what the hell is up with this machinery~


Is it a plea to stop the corruptions and the emotions that we see are scary~
body buried, 6 feet below under the tombstone~
all alone with nothin to be shown~
nothin to believe to receive~
all we get are bad stuff to grieve ~
we just wanna live and get away from shit~
energy flowin, heart beatin to shit that we are readin~
we need to be leadin and succeedin so we dont got that bad feelin~
we gotta be healin and not stealin what we appreciatin greatly~
collapsin on top of me is the story of heavy machinery~

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It doesnt matter if you win as long as you give everything in your heart

- michael jordan

I am gonna be what i wanna be, but not just what i wanna be but what i am.

- 2hot2handle(myself)

okay, kobra no showed for this battle,

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It doesnt matter if you win as long as you give everything in your heart

- michael jordan

I am gonna be what i wanna be, but not just what i wanna be but what i am.

- 2hot2handle(myself)

you need to rhyme EVERY bar...
i didnt read it all - i wont lie.
i=the opart i read coula been improved by rhyming at the end.. woulda kept me more interested and i woulda read it all..
thats my advice.. take it and ill give you more in ya next battle.

pz - check my battle...