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.| u bring drama?...i know ur bluffin, take ur shoes off n its ur soul i'm cuttin |.
.| underated newbie!, tryin to proove his weight is heavy but can't control his uppins |.
.| this is a battle of the beast, until ur rottin there will never be peace |.
.| but i'd still feast on u, ur discolored n deceased like Summer Christmas trees |.
.| C_Drama u the wackest at free's...why try n compete? |.
.| cuz ever since u stepped in RB u bugged me like a fly at my feet |.
.| i'm fly when i speak, i'm the boss of the fleet...i notice u like to speak ur mind |.
.| so I left ur brain on the curb so u can share ur thoughts with the streets |.
.| i wouldn't bother to spare this child, cuz nobody misses ur cheery smiles |.
.! to everyone u don't even exist, ur rhymes are as empty as ur profile !.

.|u haven't posted yet bro|.
.|try n stick to ur rules|.
.|2:39 was the 20 mins.|.
.|u should be DQ'd|.
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ayo, sorry for taking so long man, was on the phone for most of the time, keyin it now................................

Some serious ass whoopin when he's spinning 720 degrees//
At mach 3 speeds flyin like dry leaves in the breeze//
Walkin 'round wit bendin knees and jaws shaped like parenthesis//
Lookin like he was a victim of twenty-three bees//
This fag got dishragged and dragged like duffel bags on old hags//
Now this drag queen came back to RB toe tagged and bagged//
Stay away from porn mags, remember what happened last time when you got caught?//
I apply so much pressure to his dome I'll even break his thoughts//

.| u bring drama?...i know ur bluffin, take ur shoes off n its ur soul i'm cuttin |.
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nice *sole* play there had a good lil thing going with that opener


.| but i'd still feast on u, ur discolored n deceased like Summer Christmas trees |.
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third christmas tree line ive seen today so i mark it as PLAYEd


.| so I left ur brain on the curb so u can share ur thoughts with the streets |.
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that was your nicest line the BACK BONE to your verse


now to c drama


Some serious ass whoopin when he's spinning 720 degrees//
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IM SICK OF DEGREES LINES there everywhere

At mach 3 speeds flyin like dry leaves in the breeze//
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filler, but nice
Walkin 'round wit bendin knees and jaws shaped like parenthesis//
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good line perhaps your best in my op

This fag got dishragged and dragged like duffel bags on old hags//

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that was nice as well very creative

drag queen line was bad tho
OK
overall i thought bionicle had a great advantage over your lack of word play his SOLE line was more than your whole verse
C however had more vibe flowing through his

there fore vote goes to C drama

ok please pay back the favor and vote on either
hot ice vs me
or libba dee vs hazy
you hate being slept on and so do i

OK its not letting me poll
lmao
ill come back in a few and will check
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Damn i think this was obvious, but il break it down seein as i have too,

Punches - Bionicle, obiously
Personals - Neither
Meta's - Bionicle
Wordplay - Tie
Vocab - C-Drama

Bion definately got this, not to be 2 offensive but c-drama seemed lik ehe was freestylin!!

uppin (#1)
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uppin this for da second time
(#2)

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Bionicle took this...no doubt
C-drama what drug were you on when yo wrote that?

anyway
Stronger punches
and a better put together verse took this

Vote-Bionicle

bionicle has just merked c drama's ass

better

punches: bionicle
flow: bionicle
wordplay: bionicle
personals: bionicle
vocab: c drama

funny the one that made me laugh the most: bionicle

final: bionicle

uppin this shit

lets hurry up wit da merkin on me lololol


i just need to start new battles this shit been here for over 2 weeks, hurry up and vote this shit

(#3)

come on peep this shit yall

and hit this battle up too

Lyrical Cyanide VS C-Drama