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no d/r or haters aight
i'll spit first

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I'll try and end this wit a quick spit

Im the solution,the peroxide,the fuckin antidote/put me in a rhyme I wont spit no fansy flow/ill spit sum fuckd up shit thatll cut you,plus gets u fucked,im sick and-im-dope/ill release a verse, sit down and watch u stand and choke/i aint a bitch,im a man,no joke/burnen thru u and createn more pain canker sores/ill hang ur chords above the stage/then shoot them down a lovly phrase/
People say Im harsh, when femcees face me they shrivil up like old men standin in the cold/ i jus started doin this shit but i'll elivate, take structure n become a work of art like Mold/
Im like a disease I eat away at MC's, I'll leave this bitch bleedin inbetween his Knees like he's got Herpees/ a fuckin STD, ill spit in ya eyes so ya cant see no more, Business is more sneeky then sound waves creepin up on blind folks frum the TV/
I handle more beef than hookers and sluts/ ur capabal of nuthin, Brainsurgeons go more 'Style' than 'Crew Cuts'/ ppl are affriad of me they know when to watch they Tone, if not their bein dislocated like bones and put on the flatline like a Dead Cell phone/! ima take u under the surface and haunt you like a Goblen/ you cumin into this battle wit the "odds stacked against you", like the "Rockets' wit out Steve Francis", So Houstin we have a Problem/!................................................. ...

Uppin This

ill vote when he drops. in the mean time, go vote at
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=72621

peace............................................. ...................................

Stop freeposting in my battles or I'll fuckin talk to the mods, thats how I got banned last time and I was a vet so they wont hesitate to ban ur ass

anyway i cant vote so just vote on this later


peace out

This better not be a no show, spit ur fuckin verse kid



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CAN THE MODS CLOSE THIS


im not wastin my time no more, surgeon if u see this dont post ur verse cuz im usin it in another battle, ya took too long

mabe another time, peace out



NOBODY VOTE IF HE POSTS

keystyle

I'll kick your pelvic bone into your cranium so you can change "YOUR-FRAME-OF-MINE"!!!!
Your verse was the typical GAY ISSUE!! QUIT "FRONTIN"!! like others! "You're-PLAIN-AT-RHYME"!!! <1>
Either slow or stupid to see, like your crack-habit,-"shouldn't-have-started-me"!!!!
INEXORABLE NIGGA!!!! Could have reversed the ALPHABET,-WOULDN'T-HAVE-BETTERED-"B"!!!! <2>
I'll take ya rhyme, "rip-it, "eat-it" and "shit-it" while you're thinking, "Why is he hating?"!
Ripping the "pupil" out....posting it to a sociopath....so you think you're "an-eye-elating"(annihilating)!!!! <3>
Ya lyrics are USLESS, flow is DIFFUSENESS, what made you think YOU COULD DO THIS!?!?!
You want to know what BEING GOOD IS, it's leaving niggas with nothing, now that IS TRULY "ROOT"-"LESS"!!!!!! <4>
You "stretch bars" like starving CHOCOHOLICS!!! You'll "die on the net" like trapezing ALCHOHOLICS!!!!
It's due to punchlines SO HORRID, I had to have you "surrounded" like a dot in HYPOBOLICS!!!!<5>
You were mad-ta-start! I attack-you-wacks with locked bars like AL-CA-TRAZ!!!!
I'll rip you a hole new one, stick it in ya skull, so against the next nigga, YOU CAN MIND-YA-ASS!!!!<6>
cuz I'll for you punch lines, IF YOU DON'T DISRESPECT ME, HOW COULD YOU "TOUCH" MINE????
WHAT A DUMB ASS! YOU'D STILL BE IF YOU ATE LAVA AND WAS FORCED TO SPIT A "HOT RHYME"!!!!!<7>

SHIT I AINT DONE YET ----- I'M ABOUT TO HAD 3 MORE BARS --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

U idiot I just said dont post

this doesnt count

take that verse and use it in anotha battle cuz tahts what I did wit mine

DONT VOTE ON THIS


peace out


ps: its in the rules ur allowed to use ur old verse if the battle hasnt been voted on

i was doing 2 battles at once you dick face
check the front line two threads two keystyles -- -how the fuck i'm I going to be done in time will typing to see your fucking --- IF YOU DON"T POST IN TIME BULLSHIT -- NOW because of your stupid retard behaviour I've wasted 40 mins of time -- - VOTES --

MINE AREN'T GOING TO WASTE -- I DON'T WORK ENOUGH OF HOURS OF THE DAY TO WASTE 40 MINUTES -- FUCK WHAT YOU SAID -- WE GETTING VOTING FOR THIS -- I AINT AN ASS HOLE, I'M JUST NOT UNDERSTANDING WHEN PEOPLE CLEARLY WASTE MY TIME -- AND THEIRS

U FUCKING IDIOT ONCE AGAIN
DO I HAVE TO EXPLEAIN THIS AGAIN U FUCKIN RETARD

first off, you were suppose to post first cuz it was ur callout, but i let that go

then u took for ever, it took u 40 minutes to post that? u fuckin pathetic

ANd Finally

IT DIDNT GO TO WASTE! the next time u battle, you can use this verse in it! ok! wtf is hard to unerstand about that!

This will not be voted on, its too late cuz i posted this verse in anotha battle already

Once again if u still dont get it

YOUR VERSE DID NOT GOTO WASTE, SET UP A BATTLE WIT SUM1 ELSE AND USE IT, FUCK!

peace out see ur ass around

THE BEST WAY TO MAKE A MONKEY OUT OF A MAN IS TO QUOTE HIM:
PROOF YOU'RE THE RETARD: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=72846
I ANSWERED YOUUUUR CALL OUT

I DON'T LIKE TO RECYCLE! THAT'S WHY I'M PISSED AT YOU!!!!

AND YEST IT TOOK 40 MINS --- TYPING A VERSE AGAINST ENVY THEN ONE AGAINST YOU --- USE YOUR COMMON SENSE YOU DICK WIT