ha ha! now it's strange that everybody's brain is suddenly deranged,
and every fan is start'n to think it's a game
you pull out your fuck'n glock and it starts to be open range
you pull back on that fuck'n tech and everybody's in flames
now everybodys a shame, nobody's say'n so names
you just been framed, so now your whole life has changed
this shits the same, so now who's the fuck to blame
for the industry be'n corrupted, fucked with and lame..........me
that boy Jimmy with a sawed off semi
you ain't fill'n me then fuck it! this shits too skimpy
i ain't a newbie, just a person new to this forum
my name ain't rudy, so don't get me fucked up with boredom
this a horror movie, somebody betta help this cat
i'm only 3 seconds away from put'n this gak in his back
i'm only here for a visit, so i gotta hush these bitches
if you one of them faggets that want me dead, then keep wish'n
cause i ain't gone stop dish'n this shit until i'm deminished
so until then you betta believe i ain't finished
i got to many fuck'n issues, it's to many rules
to many fools out there steady try to fit in my shoes
what do i gotta prove to you that you can't stop me dude
you can keep that shit to yourself cause i ain't gone stop being rude
this here is the truth, it's all fun and games on the outside
but i'm real in the booth, give'um the boot
poof mutherfucker and bitch begone
you gone feel this song and if i'm wrong
fuck it! i might as well be dead wrong
and when this lead bust and you lying dead in a truck
your girl gone be next on her knees kiss'n my nuts
gett'n her pretty ass fucked with my dick up her guts
and when that baby comes and i'm shit out of luck
i'm a just be me with these 2 fingers raised
scream'n "WHO GIVES A FUCK"

u got potential man, that wasnt bad for a newb, i was feelin the message, but it seemed alot like somethin eminem would say, u had some good wordplay and vocab, and ur content and topic were still a little played in my opinion, but keep at it, keep droppin and elevatin kid, u got talent.

peace.....

yeah that was dope dawg it was good for a newb but you need to keep elevatin but i do see some potential in ur vocab and wordplay anyway keep postin i look forward to readin more in da future

thanks! i'll do my best to keep this shit up

that was great
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that shits pimp for a new guy, man definitly keep that shit comin!!

just keep that shit coming
i see potential
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