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better drop when my names talked, got the glock cocked ready for shots/
flow brought to ya block watch it cuz its hot as sun spots/
ya rhyme structure put together like jenga and im knockin it over/
frustration appearin cuz i ripped ya like a cardboard book cover/
battle against me the first feelin u get is defeat/
razor blades at ya ankles causin "de-feet"/
your sinkin like an anchor only faster/
like the fat kids at school, all u receive is laughter/
rhymes produced quicker then computer reflexes/
only way u escapin if u wearin fake hair and big-dresses/
my rhymes are like element compounds /
jus like diamond and gold king-crowns/
better give it up cuz there is no internet lost-n-found/
bitin rhymes causin u runnin like the fox-n-hound/
i shit on mcs and use ya notepad as toilet-paper/
cry about it, like child abuse i'll slap ya for spoiled-behavior/
bring your hottest shit cuz i extinguish hotness with tidal-waves/
i dont need knives n nines to murder u, my verse impacts in fatal-ways/