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Old 10-11-03, 01:00 PM   #1
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OutWrites Return To Writing!! [Love Or Lust]

IP: 7CD0 E65D

*Over The Phone*

OutWrite: Naw Baby, It Aint Even Like That 'Tween Me And You
Some Random Hoe: Wha You Meen?
OutWrite: Is It Love Or Lust *Lust Lust Lust*


Love Love Love Lust Lust Lust In My Brain
Cant Get It Str8, How You Gunna Stay Wit Him Babe?
Show You The Finer Thangs, Diamond Rings On Holidays
But Your Gone, When I Awake
It Dont Make Sense, Take You To Hang Wit Freinds
Hand You The Sack, Baby Breaks The Stems
From Jake To Kim, They All Agree You Should Be Wit Me
All The Cuteness In Ur Eyes When You Try To Be Mean
I'd Be Quick To Bone, But Baby Got The Special Touch
Ass U Can See From The Front, Is It Love Or Lust?

*Over The Phone*
OutWrite: You Tell Me Baby
Some Random Hoe: HeHe


Confused Words, From Gold To Pearls Babys Up Turnin My World
I Seen Pain In Ya Eyes The Time You Hooked Me Up Wit Ur Girl
And The Lies That Got Spread,I Dont Care, I Think I Love You
No Wait, Im Confuzzled. Just Wanna Touch You I Think I Lust You
But Must You, Be So Blind To See My Feelings and Chances Are Stacked
And For The Rumours That Got Spread, I Dont Care About That
I Aint Just Tryna Tap, Get U In My Lap And Just Be Done
I Wanna Be With You, Dont Run Boo, You Know Itd Prolly Be Fun
But Im So Confused, Leave That Fool Be Wit Kapz, Its Not Me U Want?!
Tell Your Boy Freind Hes A Punk, Ill Fuck Him Up Cuz This Is Love.....Or Lust....

*Over The Phone*
OutWrite: Now You See Baby? I Dont Know What To Think..Is It Love Or Lust?
Some Random Hoe: I Think It May Be Love..
OutWrite: I DONT HOE...
Some Random Hoe: Your So Meen..
OutWrite: Im Just Fuxxin Wit You..You Know I Love You...Or..Lust You


*Fades With The Hoe Laughin*
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Old 10-11-03, 01:21 PM   #2
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Its Fuckin BullShit I Gotta Up 5 Minutes After Droppin

Used To Be, Id Drop And Kids Would Swarm To Read..

WHAT HAPPENED TO MY COCK JOCKEYS???
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Old 10-11-03, 01:38 PM   #3
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I'm not one of your cock jockeys...But i can be paid...lmao

Don't atke that shit serious...Fo real

The topic was good..Your meaning behind lines was amazing ..What you wanted to say was said clearly
..That was really prominent in this piece..But i felt your flow fell of really quite badly.. I think you need some work on that
I understand this came from the heart and was a vent for your anger and frustration from your life and i repsect that..Maybe thats why it was really good.. Either way you dropped some really deep lines

Return the favour on ...::Matter Over Mind::...

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Old 10-11-03, 01:53 PM   #4
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Word..

I Wrote It To A Beat.. Its Goin Audio..Soon As uh...I Geuss When I Get Around To It LoLthe shorter lines are spossed to be paused out at the comma..but it didnt put the spaces in there fo' me
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Old 10-11-03, 06:53 PM   #5
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I'd Be Quick To Bone, But Baby Got The Special Touch
Ass U Can See From The Front, Is It Love Or Lust?

^that was simple but dope..


im not gonna give you any negative feedback cuz you know my secret identity.
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Old 10-11-03, 06:56 PM   #6
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Old 10-11-03, 08:45 PM   #7
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