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drop in 30 minutes, i will soon drop afterwards
anything else u want to add be my guest

aight yo------i had to go back and copy it-----here

might as well snap ya own neck, and do it without-pressure/
fuck produce in detroit, um everyone in my towns-fresher/
by a sound measure, and just loungin-wut the hellz a necrid a rodent not found-yet/
nec's got a betta record, how did that happen-not even ya moms'll listen to ya rappin/
just a wack has-been, i meant newbee-so sue-me-i'll bring ya level down like richie-valenz/
nec's in danger, once my skillz anger-cut peel's-bangas/
feelin anxious, ya nuthin but a wanksta-that i hang on a hanger/
dun't get upset, when they dun't pass the mic-their doin ya a- favor/
just become a hater, reevaluate ya last bar-sucked/
worse then carvel-fudge, wanna take a shot at me? i got a cartell of-slugs/

this battle's a catastrophe, like Shakespeare Plays i'll turn this shit to a tragedy/
this kid FUCKS THE DEVIL in the ass just to say he PACKIN HEAT//

like BLACK HOMOSEXUALS IN TEXAS i'm DRAGGIN QUEENS/
i'ma masterpiece, ELTON JOHN CD'S fills his collection of FAGGOT BEATS//

this battle is a tragic scene, SHOOTIN THE ALPHABET to say u BLASTED G'S/
ur family's SLAUGHTERED MEAT, NO FATHER??, well i'll cook this BASTARD'S BEEF//

cutastrophe's rhymes a blasphemy, look at this battle and u will see he's a wack emcee/
it's sad to see this DONKEY HUGGER the way he FUCKS ASS FOR FREE//

STOMPIN MORE HOLES IN UR ASS than BASEBALL PUNTERS (cleets, haha)/
u wouldn't have HOT RHYMES if it was July 19th in the MIDDLE OF THE SUMMER//

lol--------------nice spitt flow-wise ahahah---votessssss????? i think ya got me dawg but we'll see i was'nt feelin it---and ya had alota ass in ya rhyme-----haha

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opener:tie
closer:necrid
structure:necrid
flow:cut
punches:necrid
overall:necrid

hotlines
necrid:
this battle is a tragic scene, SHOOTIN THE ALPHABET to say u BLASTED G'S/
ur family's SLAUGHTERED MEAT, NO FATHER??, well i'll cook this BASTARD'S BEEF//
~second line isnt as gud as first~

cut:
just a wack has-been, i meant newbee-so sue-me-i'll bring ya level down like richie-valenz/
nec's in danger, once my skillz anger-cut peel's-bangas/


please peep this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84191

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uppin #2................................................ .................................................. .

uppin #3....help me out on this cutastrophe...i only got two more uppings to do...........................

yo necrid got this one handz down
flow=both
punches=necrid
overall=necrid

vote-necrid......cutastrophe one werd elevate

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ima say necrid took this, and hes gonna merk gbacd, but anywho heres my breakdown

structure-tie
flow-tie
vocab-tie
wordplay-cuast
punches-necrid
personals-necrid
overall-necrid

props to the both of ya, i apologize on behalf of my crew, no hate fellas, but that was a good battle.

yo can u please return the favor and hit this up wit an honest vote?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84781
itd be much apprecieated.

peace.......

not really yo he got my ass----i wasn't feelin it---just look out for round 2 though---it's gonna be hotta-----gonna be soon---so stay posted...lol---i'm a hit ya battle up too-----oneeeeee

yo thank, but necrid, gbacd isnt gonna battle, so that thread is just a waste, he was kiddin around, he didnt really wanna, so yo hes gonna no show, but no shows dont count as wins so u might wanna just delete that battle.

bullshit he seemed pretty serious next time tell ur boy to not bitch out just because he read another battle i had

aight its kool holmes, i guess he aint feelin this site cause he said hes gonna delete his account, so u wont be seein him anymore.

peace.....