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Old 10-13-03, 12:17 AM   #1
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Dog Its The Fearless Flow I Always Manage To Piece Together, You Gotta Read This

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" FEARLESS FLOW "

me and my crew meet up like assemblys and we simlply headed for/
dough and a way to express our struggle through similies and metaphors/
ya mans stealin, anyway to come up in this life and give this rap game advanced healin/
guess most of ya'll aint feelin me thas the reason my record o and three (0-3)/
came up in markham and knowin me, i switched over to this rap game, i just can't picture myself writin poetry/
i think god has been dyin to send me/
and this is not even a fourth of my pain this is sumthin like an diary entry/
for a while in this i was a free agent/
mind and soul achin follow that road and to do that you gotta keep straigtened/
now i'm wit my real family in this game the MAC 4 LIFE crew/
like skip college, PACASO get signed striaght outta high school/
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Pacaso mac the Baskin Robbins Street(hustla tryin to scoop up this ice and cream)
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Old 10-13-03, 12:27 AM   #2
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aight man, that was ok, it was kinda short, next time ima suggest make it a little longer, and try and make all ur lines about the same length to help wit the flow, u had ok vocab and wordplay, next time try and fit in a few more multis though, ur content and topic were pretty damn played in my opinion, so next time pick a more decent topic to write about.....keep droppin dude, u have ability......

peace.......
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