This is a poem i created from a horror novel i attempted to write a few months ago...it took to long to write the novel, and i've been busy (as many of rapbattles finest poets will tell you) so i put my ideas into a poem instead, if i ever do write a novel, you can expect it to be about the harshness of reality...hope this makes easy reading....and remember, its all good., thank you for replying - Liba Dee


Shock set in, the eyes frozen in a state of pure terror,
Staring up at the vacant, decaying cieling, with its fading, crackling light.
The features disorientated as if time had stopped the screaming once and for all,
The torso stiff and cold in the icy water, as if she'd seen the devil in her last few moments of life.
Her flaxen curls swimming in the murky water, polluted with the blood that wet her forehead,
Her hands floating motionless at her side, with every ripple of the water they would rise or fall,
And the dripping footprints on the floor tells me she is not long dead.
I cannot tear myself away from this grusome sight yet fear is compelling me to turn around,
A glint of silver, painted with red,
And another woman falls, dead, to the ground.


by the way, if you haven't figured it out.....the 'other woman' is the person telling the story...you probably got that but i can be confusing...tell me what you think, much respect.

lmao at your ava

i cant tell you gurl i can just get em for u i tol yo uthat

teh cholor scheme of this peice had a good effect especially the blue tho hard to read it aids in teh HEY IF I WANT TO KNO WHO THE OTHER WOMAN IS I GOTTA READ THE BLUE

lmao
anyways good lil peice gurl tho its kinda sick and makes me picture the RING where they find that body of the astranged russina gurl in teh tub

sick

anyways nice drop lady libba

fa sho thankin you my laydee!

You Write Novels? Thats Interesting...
It would be interesting if the poem was all written in red
but its good!

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well actually, no i dont, but i was bored a few months ago, before i came to RB, (i was grounded!) and i had all these mixed up feelings in my head so i tried to put it all down on paper and decided that my anger would make a good story, and it would of too, cept i didnt get to finish it. If i ever get round to writing one, i'll keep you posted, that is, if you want me to.

Great poem liba dee. Full of originallity and color. Was well worth the read. keep droppin liba dee.

MM

yeah once along time ago i wanted to write books, and become some big star throu them like the harry potter books i guess, but my feelings usualy changed so much that i dont have time to write a book on what was happening when i come up with another idea for a book, anyway yeah if you do finish it some day i'd like to hear from you about it ks.

the poem it was creepy, beacause you made it all come alive right before me, with so much detail and in so little of words it is a great piece, nice twist at the end too, yeah it does remind me of the ring too, but i didnt see the girl in the tub coz i already had my eyes closed coz i knew it was coming,lol yes im wus when it comes to horror movies.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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