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GanGsTa0FiED
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slapin shit up for the fuck of it
winnin fo the luck of it get stuck wit it nine shells flyin yo way *pause* bitch ur impitent fuckin wit me u aint innocent this gangsta-shit- im into it get back to the pussy clinic b4 u get droped wit some shells young ass soldiers runnin up gettin stunned up i dun gotta use bullets to abuse just spit at u mentally - bitch, ull bruse havin u in a confuse - state of mind irrate bind concertrate deffinition of real ness illness- just cuz u got H.I.V dun mean u can spit ill u aint G cuhz *pause* chill - havent stunned u in a minute impitent~sinnin shit- cerebral flow //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// |
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uppin
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Light Weight
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IP: F19F D969
The multies are there, it has a nice flow though the HIV reference is a played line. It was simple. I would recommend putting more wordplay and vocab into this that would make it more interesting to read.
Now if you would be so kind hit up my open mic- Asylum Gates/Dear Omens, sadly it is getting slept on
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k thanks for up nigga
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1E
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
i thought this was decent enought, the only thing i didn't like was the rhyming of the same word, over and over, i dontreally like that style, and it seemed a bit basic......but decent.....peace
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Can u beat me?..Hell No
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IP: C1DA C961
i think this flow was pretty tight. u could have used some better vocab, but your structure was tight and u had some good rhymes.
nice drop holla |
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IP: 27B1 49F3
yea thanks
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