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finished, check this shit out if you want to....
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when i joined this site a little while back, i was disenfranchised with the state of hip-hop an rap/
i still am an comp plannin' to expose the scam, come through an challenge 'mc's' who think they gots-the-right to jam/ if you wanna call em' 'mc's,' fuckin' nelly fans you enable that pop slut to transform a lyrical-art-form-in-to a fuckin' sham/ i wish i could rewind take away the grands, take the band-aid off his face an replace it wit my hand/ i run rhymes an pop lines, come with the action, comp leave you wonderin' 'where'd he get that caption?' comp flows fantasic with intergalactic rhyme didactics leaves foes in traction/ the last fool who tried to step to this action left the battle ring w/his vocal cords in-active/ so nelly, there's the facts son, please come to my town an bring your rhymes an blast em,' cuz like comp said, your futures black son/ you gonna end up in the slums while i pimp your mansion........... jus' a short little piece, i might expand it later an add shit on top an bottom, an maybe a chorus or somethin.' i kinda think it's got potential even if it is just a verse. but tell me what you guys think, should i add to this piece? or just let it be? Last edited by compatible : 10-15-03 at 11:29 PM. |
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