10 lines
no crew
no d/r
no hate
u spit first

im here, k i'll spit 1st
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check-in
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check
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u juss did dumbass get freepostin
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and hurry up dickhead

im a verbal assasin sent here on a mission//
to wipe out this bitch ass emcee straight outta existence//
ima lyrically murda you an leave your twisted body 10 ft under//
rhymes comin outta my mouth faster then a bolt of thunder//
i'll come up on your block with my glock cocked lookin to take away your crown//
pump you with a barrage full of bullets an watch your blood hit the ground//
now ima give you the chance now to wave your white flag and walk your ass home//
you decide to stay then be prepared to get hit with a lyrical slug made purely of chrome//
go down faster then the 9/11 towers when u see the way i handle my flow//
your scared now aint you, here's the mic, now it's your time to go//

im the dick head...pishh...scared pussy bitch went offline
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lightning has bolts not thunder and u had no personals....(biter)
ANyWAyZ

ur only mission was to get ripped like a virgin//
ur gonna be so fucked up its gonna look like u got operated on by a retarded surgeon//
dogg u must not no ur shit cause its 6ft under u bout to be there//
cause this battle is over instanly when I relized u was a queer//
u bout to keep pumped wit lead all smackin ya dome//
dogg ur talkin bout ur gonna shoot me..lol wit what Chrome?//
dogg went offline cause unlike u i dont live on tha net//
ur juss a newbie bitch u fuckin wit a lyrical vet//
I not spittin hard in this battle cause i dont need 2//
I droppin my weakshit possible and still bout to defeat u//

uppin 4 votes
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ok flawless ya had an ok flow, structure was weak, and the punches need work---jwatts ya flow was ok too, structure was ok, punches also need work but ya had harder disses then him---vote=jwattz

peep my battle with necrid
and the ones in the sig---thanx