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Old 10-15-03, 08:54 PM   #1
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Chek Out My New Banga ("oh Damn")

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click the link below and tell me what you think and wat i need to improve.

my song " oh damn"
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http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?id=627004&q=hi

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http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?id=627004&q=lo
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Old 10-16-03, 08:32 AM   #2
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wat yall think?
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Old 10-16-03, 08:43 AM   #3
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Alright this what i think.
beat was alright, but your flow was kinda monotone you need to bring some heat. you sounded like you wasnt having fun making that song. but i think you got potential just keep on workin at it.
and you will get there make more tracks.
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Old 10-16-03, 08:53 PM   #4
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thanx mayn i will take yo advice into consideration good lookin
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Old 10-18-03, 11:37 PM   #5
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Aight this is what I think...i think yer voice is good and you got potential like Phylo said, but the sound quality was bad...you just didn't sound comfortable on the mic...keep spittin and keep droppin yer only gonna get better, it takes practice so keep doin ya thang and i'll be lookin out for yer elevation...check my battle vs. Supasilious in audio if you wanta see fire 2...stay up!
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