Stand Proud

Avah Noo

We've spent all the hairy foes, in dreams - expectant of some scary blows
Please don't deny the facts, kids. . We've all drempt of the scenarios
The youth have sided with the tough-guys who, disguised, patrol it all
Whilst pacifists preach to swallow pride that's the size of bowling balls
Controlled, we tell they hate it as the toll is elevated
I'd support the worst of things, but their goal's not celebrated
Setting's picture-esque - our thoughts excel through towns & minds
Bloody clashes spill from our brains 'til they deluge down our spines
When we're whipped by neutrality why should we sift through the fallacies?
Either way the so-called "wars" continue 'til we come to grips with reality
This should go as a foot-note saying, "Seldom do we finish these. .
. . sessions of discussion," my friends - I say welcome to Divinitry

Potent

He put so much sweat and blood into it till he sweated blood
He lifts the atmosphere so it surrounds the unniverse in clubs
Diverse love is what has brought him to raise his arms in joy
Heads swollen cuz dime honeys praised his charms deployed
Others harmed & annoyed while he stands calms & destroys..
The so called real McCoys & now has established a new empire
The desire to take it is more than that of burning a fire & retire
Peoples conspired.. But the day he expires is the day he dies
No oaths now stand..Cuz everyones forced to stay down & lie
Crowned his pirde by dental ceromony cuz its female genitiles
Like the king is always in his presence.. he stands credentials

Edicius

Call me what u want, ..i dont care shout it out,
no matter what u think, im still standin proud.
Humilate me, ...makes u feel good?..be my geust,
ill make sure to flip the script,and make me best.
Multiple doubts, ....when i was spreadin, i wrote,
'get other hobby'collect stamps,not close to dope.
Rediculous, u play guitar aswell?..well, ..judge me,
artistery flowin tru my vaines,so im jus lettin it be.
Its a discrage,all the judgements,swinged at my head,
even some friends/fools ignored me, left me for dead.
Can u imagine and thats what call them selves,friend,
its coo tho,found me a brother,stick wit me to the end.

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Avah Noo
You ahd nice flow, it was a little choppy in some places but overall it was pretty smooth. You certainly have a good vocab and it showed here, you used it well, you didn't use an excessive amount of it, you played it well.
Best Bar
"Setting's picture-esque - our thoughts excel through towns & minds
Bloody clashes spill from our brains 'til they deluge down our spines
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Potent
You flow was of da chain, you had nice internals gtoo. You didn't use such an array of vocab but you made up for it with your bars, i felt they had more meaning, more complexity.
Best Bar
"The so called real McCoys & now has established a new empire
The desire to take it is more than that of burning a fire & retire"

Edicius
You had the more personal feel towards the topic. You put yourself in an vunerable position and basically just said: "Fuck You All". You had good internals and the bars were a nice length, wheras i felt Avah's were a bit long. You stayed on flow and you seemed to have a deeper message behind it.
Best Bar
"Multiple doubts, ....when i was spreadin, i wrote,
'get other hobby'collect stamps,not close to dope."

Overall
4/5, this was a dope song, you coulda used a hook which would've probably made me give a 5/5 but it was still dope, y'all should be 'proud'.

Thankyou.. Wakey Wakey..

sum dope shit here from all 3 of y'all

really felt the topic and lyrics and vocab portrayed the topic which was just dopeness......

flow was gud and sum multis used by potent........

i agree wit rythmic by sayin a hook would've made it better but all three verses were ill shit peeps.........

i like the way you all worked 2gethor...avah noo set the scene and the other 2 came in well and added there own views and shit on it.....
it all came togethor well and made a dope piece.............stay up y'all

Peace............................................. .....................................Fiori

Yea...thnx


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