lines=any
no bitin crew votes ect
u drop first and ill spit jus afta u

ima drop 18 lines so match that ok

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I'm sorry i'll destroy you mentally//you'd better take that literally// don't think i'll do it intentially// cause of me you a mystetie//you gone missin//your family pissin out years of tears//thanks to me you met all your worst fears//shit//get of the pc hommie//drown your sorrows in beers//you just suffered defeat//neel, bow// kiss my ring, kiss my feets// no you ain't likin my dick//you fucking prick// you should stick to making straight people like me sick// with your gay ways//shit become a rent boy//i hear it pays// cause their no way you makin money through rap//you better turn back//the word on the street// i have the beef// to meet what all you dick riders need//thorugh my tight lyrics gained respect// gaining respect//giving respect to those who deserve it// not many deserve it// if you think you got it// then serve it//i'll smash it back in your face// you cant keep up with my pace//im first place in this race//youd better embrace shit all over your face

ok wat eva ima rip dis kid

battlin me son, u gon need more than a gat wit u,
last battle i took da L...now im handin it back to u.
since elevated..for this kat no need to come strong,
i made my impression thru readybrek wit a thong on.
if u had any rep before this..u just lost all ya stripes,
u winnin this battle is like a poodle...winnin a dog fight.
fuckin wit me hand to hand..you'll quikly lose a tooth,
this battle's a no contest..im a mole who abused a fruit.
its not even arguementive u softer than a pillow case,
this round...u'll jus be a fuckin Ghost like killahface.
let alone ya wackness...even ya reps drifted da past,
its no doubt..readys always been kissin my ass.
i bet he'll no show...and come back witta lil sorry note,
readybrek aint droppin hot bars..if anything its prolly soap.
ill keep poundin this kid..until his spine is backless,
ya verses suck..a lamp wouldnt shine ya wackness.
and shit fucka rough and final...ya lines is draftless,
if i wanted da spotlight...i'd just go find an actress.
i got better things to do than jus fight wit bitchy kids,
grand finale? ready 'takin a club to da head' like diddy did.

votes plz

uppin 4 votes

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i need dis closed so plz fuckin vote

uppin 4 votes

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uppin for votes

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This was pretty hard to decide. Firstly Readybreks structure wasnt good, whereas mysteries was. Both verses were quite creative and had some good punches and personals. However I'm gonna give it to Mysterie coz he was slightly stronger on the punches and personals. This was so close I had to read it 3 times.
Respect to both of ya's
Vote Mysterie



Peace!!!

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HARRY R.I.P
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In Respect

/\ thanks for votin can more people plz vote on dis its been up for like a week

plz jus get it closed

lol---uhh redy brek ya had an ok flow, structure was weak, disses were aight----mysteris ya had a ok flow, structure was good, punches were good---overall mysterie merked this cat---vote=mysterie

yo mysterie peep my battles up and vote----thanxxx

/\ thanks fo votin yeah ill vote on ya battlez wen i got enough posts

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