This is my verse of "True Felonz". Me and my boy T.C.K. are doin this in audio and i wanted to post my lyrics. Tell me whachu think.

6-4 step in da place and petrifyin niggaz....
Have em stone cold starin and shookin up niggaz...
I had plenty of beef back in tha hood dayz...
Now I came back to tha hood and changed my wayz
Im still a fuckin felon only y'all wish y'all were....
U cant even do tha easiest thing right hurr....
Jmoney aint nothin but a lil pussy...
He heard my sick flows and it got him mushy
Far from pushy... I diss y'all for only one reason
Cause y'all rent cars and pose wit them cheesin...
U neva held up a bank or gave a nigga a shank
U only been charged wit eatin out a skank
U ridin on huffy wheels... not spinnaz....
Y'all eat outcha moms for sum leftover dinnaz
BoyRoy... RoyBoy... Or whateva-tha-fuck ya name is
Make like Charles Sr. and tell me What Tha Day Is?
Ryu... Gimme a dragon punch wit Ken...
Gimme a shoryu and a strong Hadou Ken...
DJ Kurz... Shit I heard fuckin Worse...
Thats why ur turntables in tha back of tha hearse
Now J-Ro... Ur name sound like a name of a ho
Except its ya mama's maiden name just to make dough
And Levi can read by just to get his ass by
But overall... None of u niggaz... ever got high
There's no point in wastin rhymes on u lil bitches
That think they tha shit and try to pull a few bitches
When u grow balls to go into a rap battle....
Then stop talkin shit and hop off ya saddle....
My flows will kill ya and make y'all asses chill
Then I take ya and bury ya up in Silent Hill....
Y'all fuckin stupid bitches actin like u got gangs
Y'all aint got shit except for Wild Mustangs...
Im tired of u Texas bastards tryina act tough
Tha flow is over niggaz... Y'all burried in tha rough....

Aight now drop ya honest feedback.... Lataz...

Cmon y'all dont sleep on this open mic. Leave sum feedback.

O SHIT you dissed tha fuck outta those mutha fuckas i was feelin it i liked this line "Jmoney aint nothin but a lil pussy...
He heard my sick flows and it got him mushy"

thanx for ya reply dawg.

Nice reply to "Running the game" by me

aight i'll check that out for ya.

Descent, flow was off in some parts, but in audio most lyrics written down sound madd stupid, and all of us audio heads know this. Descent verse, some topics i was impressed with, stay up.
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Thanks for tha feed back Eye Que. And that is true.

that was hard deadly, i was feelin it, can't wait to hear it on audio peace