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Mystery~Murdera 5 100.00%
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Old 10-18-03, 12:51 PM   #1
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KnightShade VS Mystery Murdera

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Hmm can it be?, KnightShade is battling again? *waits for the haters* right.

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no crew
no d.r
no hate.
no feeding

No Groupies

People like Jae, cam, detona etc cannot vote.

my groupies? hmm who are they only mystery can tell.

No Alliases can vote.


Voters please break down both verses when you vote

*prevents swaying etc.
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Old 10-18-03, 02:03 PM   #2
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Alright.. Look...

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I wrote the BluePrints For this Battle and yes.. Your Defeat Was Planned,
Come on, murdera's going through some hard times.. I guess he Just Needs a Man!
When I Drop You I'm Accidentally Breakin Your fall, just be glad These Balls Saved You,
Mystery... Only reason you're the "Barz Of War Champ" is cuz you know We've All Played You!
He's just stating Un-necessary Words, Renditions of what he Thught Were Rhymes,
How he gunna beat me? mystery's more Played than "The KnightShade has Bit" Lines,
Alright look... You know mystery's Biting.. His skill level Varies Each Day,
When it comes to wackness, M~M's like KidNapped Children, He gets too Carried Away,
mystery.. I wanted to Visit Your Child Cuz I was Missin Mah Kid..
I Asked this queer to Give Me A Beat and Look What He Did..
You Dope And Ill With Heroine Infested Needles, Coughin STDs But You still lack the Sickness,
If I wanted a Wack Verse I'd Simply Copy Yours, You were Mistaken,
They Were Talkin About My Verse When They Shouted Your Name,
This battle was Well Done, You Got BURNED , Kid Only Hoped to get Toasted,
Bringin Tha Heat! The Only Way This Battle Would Be ILL Is if this Fag Never Posted,

Symbolically I RIP STYLES! And Yours Is Like Paper,
I'm TEARIN the FACTS in LINES Just to get your FAC-TORS Straight,
Now I know y'all just Lying to yourselves if you think this Rapper's Great...
When My Lyrics Hit You Like Caffiene I'm bout to Stain Him with Rhymes,
The Audience is Like Selfish Brain Donors cuz Nobody's PAy'N-iM No Mind.......



there's my Verse, Go study it, we all know you feed...
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Old 10-18-03, 11:06 PM   #3
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LOL... u still suck, keystyle, nobody but Elite
peeps can vote... Dissin 'herbs' for~doin~this
shit aint feedin so I aint neva fed...

Now Here's My Suicide Note... Dont Worry U'll Get it...

verse - Suicide -
What Am I Confused?! Time To Leave This Blow Whole Scattered
Ur tricks aren't good, they're average: LIKE SHRINKIN UR TEXT TO FORCE A FLOW PATTERN
Every Hott Line You Stole That AND You Aint Never Been Great
Complete Mismatch... I'm Godspoken n Knightshades Just A Sin-Say!
U Been Gay! Used To Rep Productions I'm The Rose That Grew Out
I Mean Damn How ya Boy Chrit Make An Elite List That Left U Out?!
Best Be Out, Come On KnightShade No Use n U Spittin
12 apostles... But U Battled 13th disciple n he Proved He Existed AND U DIDNT!
1 Per Battle Right Now Ur Below Average - but Thats Expected
Funniest Thing bout Ur crew: Erybody BUT U elevated n Left it!!
Stop Stressin, Rise Again, We'll Give U Attention Again One Day
But Do Me A Favor, ay?...
On Day 2, Dont make us force you like last time, Just Walk Away
Stalk my Prey, break Your Back -Wait- U Aint Gotta Spine To Lose
Fake n whack, Thought Personals Went Behind The Headline Newz
A Crime To Lose?! Double Convict - U Been Caught Once For Bitin
N DAMNIT STOP LYIN!!! u didn't elevate - u just Dropped ya hyphens
n Everybody Knows U Bit... But I'ma Have To Rip U The Hardest
Knightshades the Only MC To Drop A Solo CD Labeled: VARIOUS ARTIST!!!!

Wish U Would Drop An album So I could own u twice n Play U Back
Suicide Note - Murk The Mystery Myself n Leave the Solution of











Knightshades Whack!!!
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Old 10-18-03, 11:48 PM   #4
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Best Be Out, Come On KnightShade No Use n U Spittin
12 apostles... But U Battled 13th disciple n he Proved He Existed AND U DIDNT!

^ Oh No U Didnt......

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Too Bad I Cant Vote In Elite yet
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Old 10-18-03, 11:53 PM   #5
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Hmmmm A Vet Beef Battle.. Very Interesting To Read.. Good Verses From Both.. Lemme Break This Down A Bit.


I wrote the BluePrints For this Battle and yes.. Your Defeat Was Planned,
Come on, murdera's going through some hard times.. I guess he Just Needs a Man!

Decent.. Could Have Hit Much Harder

When I Drop You I'm Accidentally Breakin Your fall, just be glad These Balls Saved You,
Mystery... Only reason you're the "Barz Of War Champ" is cuz you know We've All Played You!

Ha.. Made Me Laugh

He's just stating Un-necessary Words, Renditions of what he Thught Were Rhymes,
How he gunna beat me? mystery's more Played than "The KnightShade has Bit" Lines,

Ummm.. More Of A Diss To Yourself Than Him.. This Hurt You.

Alright look... You know mystery's Biting.. His skill level Varies Each Day,
When it comes to wackness, M~M's like KidNapped Children, He gets too Carried Away,

Good Wordplay.. Would've Liked To See A Meta Instead. Hits Harder.

mystery.. I wanted to Visit Your Child Cuz I was Missin Mah Kid..
I Asked this queer to Give Me A Beat and Look What He Did..

Played Setup Punch, And Yet Another Sexual Reference.. Fall Back.

You Dope And Ill With Heroine Infested Needles, Coughin STDs But You still lack the Sickness,
If I wanted a Wack Verse I'd Simply Copy Yours, You were Mistaken,

Coming Decent Here.. But Played Both Lines.

They Were Talkin About My Verse When They Shouted Your Name,
This battle was Well Done, You Got BURNED , Kid Only Hoped to get Toasted,
Bringin Tha Heat! The Only Way This Battle Would Be ILL Is if this Fag Never Posted,
Damn.. More And More Played Lines.. Decent Bar Regardless...
Symbolically I RIP STYLES! And Yours Is Like Paper,
I'm TEARIN the FACTS in LINES Just to get your FAC-TORS Straight,
Now I know y'all just Lying to yourselves if you think this Rapper's Great...

Style Switch??? Not Much Of A Punch There.

When My Lyrics Hit You Like Caffiene I'm bout to Stain Him with Rhymes,
The Audience is Like Selfish Brain Donors cuz Nobody's PAy'N-iM No Mind.......

Dope Closer.. The Rest Of Your Verse Was Questionable...


MM Verse...

What Am I Confused?! Time To Leave This Blow Whole Scattered
Ur tricks aren't good, they're average: LIKE SHRINKIN UR TEXT TO FORCE A FLOW PATTERN

Nice Personal.. Off To A Solid Start

Every Hott Line You Stole That AND You Aint Never Been Great
Complete Mismatch... I'm Godspoken n Knightshades Just A Sin-Say!

Decent Bar Here... Good Vocab And Personals

U Been Gay! Used To Rep Productions I'm The Rose That Grew Out
I Mean Damn How ya Boy Chrit Make An Elite List That Left U Out?!

Personals Are Really Killin Knite Shade...

Best Be Out, Come On KnightShade No Use n U Spittin
12 apostles... But U Battled 13th disciple n he Proved He Existed AND U DIDNT!

Another Killer Personal.. Setup Coulda Been Better

1 Per Battle Right Now Ur Below Average - but Thats Expected
Funniest Thing bout Ur crew: Erybody BUT U elevated n Left it!!

Damn.. This Is Some Killer Shit By MM.. Props.

Stop Stressin, Rise Again, We'll Give U Attention Again One Day
But Do Me A Favor, ay?...
On Day 2, Dont make us force you like last time, Just Walk Away

Forced.. Wasnt Feelin It.

Stalk my Prey, break Your Back -Wait- U Aint Gotta Spine To Lose
Fake n whack, Thought Personals Went Behind The Headline Newz
Good Wordplay.. Decent Bar. Kinda Played Tho...
A Crime To Lose?! Double Convict - U Been Caught Once For Bitin
N DAMNIT STOP LYIN!!! u didn't elevate - u just Dropped ya hyphens

LoL.. Setups And Punches Are On Target...

n Everybody Knows U Bit... But I'ma Have To Rip U The Hardest
Knightshades the Only MC To Drop A Solo CD Labeled: VARIOUS ARTIST!!!!

Lmao! Funny As Shit.

Wish U Would Drop An album So I could own u twice n Play U Back
Suicide Note - Murk The Mystery Myself n Leave the Solution of















Knightshades Whack!!!

Good Creativity And Punch...



Overall This Was A Good Battle. Knight Shade Came Decent, And Too Played. Not Really Any Personals And the Wordplay Was Mediocre. MM Had Hard Hitting Personals The Whole Way.. He May Have Overfocused On The Biting But he Had Some Other Personals In There As Well.. He Didn't Have Much Wordplay But His Personals Hit Harder Than Any Of Knight Shades Lines...


Vote- M~M
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Old 10-19-03, 03:48 AM   #6
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okay....i was asked to vote fairly on this which i always do..bare
in mind i have no beef wit MM and knight is on my top 10 list
for cats i like.....regardless....i'm just gonna come real...so here
it is....

Knights Verse

I wrote the BluePrints For this Battle and yes.. Your Defeat Was Planned,
Come on, murdera's going through some hard times.. I guess he Just Needs a Man!
not bad opener...it was okay
When I Drop You I'm Accidentally Breakin Your fall, just be glad These Balls Saved You,
Mystery... Only reason you're the "Barz Of War Champ" is cuz you know We've All Played You!
lol....good personal and use of wordplay
He's just stating Un-necessary Words, Renditions of what he Thught Were Rhymes,
How he gunna beat me? mystery's more Played than "The KnightShade has Bit" Lines,
nice...way to flip the script also
Alright look... You know mystery's Biting.. His skill level Varies Each Day,
When it comes to wackness, M~M's like KidNapped Children, He gets too Carried Away,
again...good wordplay..decent punch
mystery.. I wanted to Visit Your Child Cuz I was Missin Mah Kid..
I Asked this queer to Give Me A Beat and Look What He Did..
no...i didnt really like this one at all...seriously
You Dope And Ill With Heroine Infested Needles, Coughin STDs But You still lack the Sickness,
If I wanted a Wack Verse I'd Simply Copy Yours, You were Mistaken,
i got lost here...can't pick up the rhyme scheme
They Were Talkin About My Verse When They Shouted Your Name,
This battle was Well Done, You Got BURNED , Kid Only Hoped to get Toasted,
Bringin Tha Heat! The Only Way This Battle Would Be ILL Is if this Fag Never Posted,
that setup threw me off...shit ain't even rhyming now...but i
finally caught back unto the rhymes on the second line all the way
to the punch...the punch is pretty played...bad

Symbolically I RIP STYLES! And Yours Is Like Paper,
I'm TEARIN the FACTS in LINES Just to get your FAC-TORS Straight,
Now I know y'all just Lying to yourselves if you think this Rapper's Great...
again..ur rhyme scheme is really messin me up....and i'm just
not feelin it...honestly

When My Lyrics Hit You Like Caffiene I'm bout to Stain Him with Rhymes,
The Audience is Like Selfish Brain Donors cuz Nobody's PAy'N-iM No Mind.......
not bad closer...decent




Mystery Murdera's Verse

What Am I Confused?! Time To Leave This Blow Whole Scattered
Ur tricks aren't good, they're average: LIKE SHRINKIN UR TEXT TO FORCE A FLOW PATTERN
good opener...but seriously...that is feeding off of his verse...
and u know it too...that has definately got to end ...ur elite..

Every Hott Line You Stole That AND You Aint Never Been Great
Complete Mismatch... I'm Godspoken n Knightshades Just A Sin-Say!
lol...that was pretty decent...kinda funny...good wordplay
U Been Gay! Used To Rep Productions I'm The Rose That Grew Out
I Mean Damn How ya Boy Chrit Make An Elite List That Left U Out?!
personal and also hard punch...i felt it
Best Be Out, Come On KnightShade No Use n U Spittin
12 apostles... But U Battled 13th disciple n he Proved He Existed AND U DIDNT!
that was pretty good...i can't front...and personally...thanks
for the props...lol

1 Per Battle Right Now Ur Below Average - but Thats Expected
Funniest Thing bout Ur crew: Erybody BUT U elevated n Left it!!
wow..again wit a harsh personal and punch...seriously
Stop Stressin, Rise Again, We'll Give U Attention Again One Day
But Do Me A Favor, ay?...
On Day 2, Dont make us force you like last time, Just Walk Away
umm..yeah...personals just keep comin...decent also
Stalk my Prey, break Your Back -Wait- U Aint Gotta Spine To Lose
Fake n whack, Thought Personals Went Behind The Headline Newz
nice metas....eh..on the punch
A Crime To Lose?! Double Convict - U Been Caught Once For Bitin
N DAMNIT STOP LYIN!!! u didn't elevate - u just Dropped ya hyphens
lol...cute...nice.....not bad at all
n Everybody Knows U Bit... But I'ma Have To Rip U The Hardest
Knightshades the Only MC To Drop A Solo CD Labeled: VARIOUS ARTIST!!!!
lmao...this was fuckin nice...i can't front at all...this was a good
ass bar...like whoa

Wish U Would Drop An album So I could own u twice n Play U Back
Suicide Note - Murk The Mystery Myself n Leave the Solution of











Knightshades Whack!!!

blah closer...i woulda stuck wit the various artist thing....




okay...here it is.....Knight...i just wasn't really feelin it mayne....
i seen like 1 or 2 at the most good punches...other than that...
the rest of it was blah...MM...i'm impressed....there was like 1 or
2 punches that i considered weak or just okay....but the rest
hit hard...u had some good metas and wordplay in there also..
and like i said...that one bar..that i woulda used as the closer was
sweet...so my vote is going to Mystery Murdera.....


Knight...i still luv you sweet cheeks



vote=Mystery Murdera
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okay..

knightsade id break it down but the cat two posts up broke it down perfectly...

so what i thought of your verse - it was aite i guess.. i hvent seen any of your battles before but im betting you used to be a lot better than this. some bars seemed forced, (the smaller text too to force the flow it seemed)... punches w/ played concepts.. (such as the just dont post ur verse one). other than that it was just average.

M~M:

dope punches and set-ups..
nice personals.
esp liked the elite list one and the 2nd to last one.
you took the battle fairly easily.

vote- MM
 
Old 10-19-03, 11:25 AM   #8
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knightshade... i dunno y u started beef wit me, dunny? I aint gonna crush u a million times like 13th disciple. Lord forbid I prewrite like you, then you'd really get it. You used to my boy, guess you got envious or something.
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Old 10-19-03, 11:54 AM   #9
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Um...

M~M took this one...
Better punches, personals....

Yep...

Sorry Shade...
M~M had you in this............
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Old 10-19-03, 12:22 PM   #10
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Vote M~M

Knightshae your verse was ight..........but make your text small in order to look less stretched is wack.........i think it hurt your verse

MM tight verse.....hot personals and punches.......you really had a very consistent verse...........and hard hitting

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When I Drop You I'm Accidentally Breakin Your fall, just be glad These Balls Saved You,
Mystery... Only reason you're the "Barz Of War Champ" is cuz you know We've All Played You!

M~M-

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