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Needs alil work but constructive feed is appreciated.

Peace

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ok
Beat
i like the beat, the church bells, an the kinda violin strings. A ill beat which could, of been ripped on.

Chorus/hook
the bit wer ur kinda mumbling, i like the effect, an over the beat it sound very nice, a great effect. you jus need to make it a il more clear, so you can hear what ur saying.

lyrics
lyrics are nice, not great not too shabby.

delivery
i dont like this, this is the downfall of the track. you need to make ur voice clear on a track so that people can actually hear what you are saying.

voice
if it was you singin the hook then, it was a great hook. But your voice dosent sound quite right on this beat..


overall
a nice track wit sum good ideas, with a little more work that could push it up to a better track.


i'ma give it 7/10

appreciated feedback.

Peace

it sounds like you mumbling/sluring your words... i cant hear your words either... your flow seems good, like it's on beat.. but you need to up the volume of the vocals... i can't even hear your voice on the hook... damn... man, u need some serious work on quality.. i know your lyrics are good 'cause i've read your texts but ya... hit me on aim, i'll give you some quality tips.. 1

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no probs.

Peace

nice lyrics, beat was aight, voice was not on the beat, but i liked it

cool thanx but it was on beat dawg.

Peace