I'm not afraid to tell the truth to your face,
the way I feel and my whole world of emotions.
Why would you try and hide the things that set us apart?
Don't be scare to tell someone you like them.
Don't ever doubt yourself because you may
think your not good enough.
All i'm asking is for you to set up and fight for
what you believe is right.
Don't get pushed around and intimidated because
your small, fat or what not.
Just simply put,
Step up for your beliefs..............
Because you know what??












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This is a great drop JT. This is one of those subjects that should be sent to pretty much everyone in todays society. They think that they arent good enough to be with a certain person, yet they are. The structure was ok, it was short and to the point. Overall, good job. Luv and respect. keep droppin

this is simple but great for those that may perhaps
lack some juice in their self esteem tank...perfect like
fresh sqeezed orange juice for someone needing some
uplifting words to get them through their day...
through their life...its a reoccuring factor that pushes
some to the brink comitting suicide or taking someone
elses life since they feel they're not a standard or trend
setter...its amazing how a lot can be said in a little...
well thats poetry for you homie....I hope you dont mind
me streaching your lines out...it makes it a lot more of
an attractive reader friendly read and will get more looks...
should get more looks...take care and stay up

Very inspiring... and I really believe you want to make a difference to people lives by offering such advice, lending them some of your courage perhaps.. and that is heartfelt to see. Really nice piece JT.

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Thanks for your replies. Yea I was wondering who changed it. Thanks, it does look better and read better. Thank you both Spect JT

yeah this here was a very lifting poem, theres getting to be more of them around here now!!!!!! it was simple put and the message was strong, you could tell you put more into getting ppl to here you then to notice how well it flowed, or if it rhymed. i like it it was nicely put, and was a good read

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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Good piece. Was worth the read. Alright structure. This is one of the most upmost things wrong with our society. People make fun of people because of there size, weight, or color and its not right one bit. You have a point to step up for what you believe in and do what is right. Good drop. Keep it up.

MM