yo 5 LINED
ill spit 1st if u want
u okay with these rules?

i will start once u check in
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arite i will write my 5 LINES if you dont like my rules then I will come up with another one but here it is...............................................

Yo jamaal i thought i spoted u buying your lyrics from the mall man thats dull of u to cheat just to beat someone out///
My lyrics are so hot they'll burn a hole in your brain and leave u in shame with a migraine and your to blame???////
You think that those lyrics you spit at me are gonna get u a win that shit makes me grin you should put them word of yours into your trash bin where u found them.////
u can try to tame me but its not my fault my raps is so crazy but u can still blame me.///
after this buy a disguise and hide from rap cuz your raps are whack there is so much lack of tallent your worse then christopher sharnet.///

good luck homie

Good Luck?
I Dont Need Luck
I got SKill Kid.... LOL

Grabs Mic
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RIP

Jamaal Will 'Curse Ya Soul', Basically 'Eatin Ya Verse Whole' - AwB Screamin For Help Like He Gettin His Purse Stole!!
Hey, It Coulda Been 'Worse Though' - And Listen, I Wouldnt Be Callin You "SON" If Ur Momz Had Taken Her 'Birth Control'!!// ouchhhhhhh

Beatin-Flawed-Hacks, "Bars-Tales More Bogus" Than "Jail-And-God-Facts"
Fraud-Stats, My Style Is "Off The Hook" Like Ur "Mothers-In-Bra-Straps"!!!!!//

This Kids "Armed Less" Than "Wifebeater-Unsleeved-Clothes"
Intrigue-Flows?? Kid Couldnt "Come Back" Armed With "Boomerang-Dil-dos"!!!!!//

Stuck-With-His-Fate, "U Are What U Eat" Kid "Shlts-Knuckles-N-Gays"
Fuk-All-The-Fakes!!! "Bench Press Buffy" U Still Wouldnt Be "Uppin-The-'Stakes'"!//

Frees-Blessed, Like "Automatic Car Openers" The Way "You-Key-Less"
I-Mean-This...Facin Me? "Brace Yourselves" Similar How "Teeth-On-Teens-Is!!!!!//

Drops Mic Cus Its Hoooooooooooooooooot
LOL
Nice Spit
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nice nice one problem look on top it says 5 LINED you did 5 bars

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Oh My Bad
Ill Allow You To Add That

Im In Like 4 Battles
With Different Rules
All Of Them Have Been
5 Bars , So I Made a
Mistake

What Would YOu Like ?

well what ever every one who votes keep in mind i said LINES he did 5 bars lol
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LOL
Alright

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uppin for some votes lets go lol
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yo jamaal took this battle wit an overall better verse and more complexity...............this was a nice lil battle..................jamaal u need to shorten up your lines a lil bit they are too strecthed........other than that u had a nice verse.........awb u need to make your rhymes more complex and get a better rhyme scheme in yo verses.........................keep battlin



my vote=jamaal

holla

thanx iceman i bin knowing i got to work on that and by the way is lightweight a good thing lol??@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@@@

Thanx For Voting IceMan
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Jamaal

UUUpinggg

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