12 Lines is the Limit
I'll spit first

Just Check In is all


Later

Shit man. This will be my 3rd battle which is open. I dont wanna get banned what do I do!!!!!!


Help

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect

Yo man in bitch slapped you said the rules was 15 lines MAX.

And can people vote on this so it can be closed and then I can get on with this battle:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86967

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect

I'm gonna have to drop tomorrow or as soon as my battles get finished. I aint got time to wait at the moment. I'll drop ASAP.

Here's the link again. Someone please get this battle done with:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86967

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect

Fine 14 cuz 15 is Uneven
And try to Post Tonight


Why'd I Except? This is a Waste of Time like Minutes on Stolen Cell Phones
Takin U out with an easy Win, Couldnt Pay Me back if I were MC Bank Loan
With only Yourself to Blame, Im comin heavier than Metal Cranes
Surroundin u like Shower Drains, Spittin badder than Acid Rain
Facing Suicide like The man Jumpin Niagra Falls
Im battlin a European who instead of Soccer Says FootBall (Profile)
Always messin up your Words like Applications Done in a Hurry
L's Skillz are more Upsetting than Citizens Picked for Judge Jurry
Too Weak, ya Gettin Burned, like Jews Not Workin the Machinary
Ur Wack, and You'll Never Change, like The Price is Right Scenery
LM's Unoticed, Like Me 10 mins ago Thinkin His Avatar was an MLB Player
U'll Spit Tomorrow? Thats cuz you Taker longer to Prepare than Tax Payers
On RB the kids Not Even Visible, like Babies with out their Booster Stools
Destroyin Ya Insicurites With-In, Now Ur really Spittin Straight From Liverpool (Location)


hurry this up buddy

Ok I can finally spit now:

Yo in my last battle I beat Orakilla, apparently he's goin mainstream/ (thats what orakilla said)
The only time you win cats like that is when your in a daydream/
He said the best poetic stuff I've ever seen, but I flipped it whereas it woulda burst your spleen/
Your a computer nerd if you know what I mean, you average 40 posts per day/ (check profile)
Havin a social life is somethin you cant say, no way/
So I woulda thought you'd have some decent shit to say when you called me out sayin "L you wanna come out to play"/ (he called me out)
9 straight wins but your first loss is comin today, 100% record has been ripped and torn/
So know you've been murdered we should all mourn for thorn, we should all pretend that we're thankful we was ever born/
Fuck mournin for him....it can wait til next dawn/ (check explainations)
It's his own fault....he called me out and sealed his fate/
He tried to diss me on my level....he wanted to take my path, but didnt get past the gate/ (check explainations)
Read between the lines and you'll realise that I dissed you personally at a furious rate/
That's coz when I read your verse I was so irrate coz it was so poor/
So I'm gonna take your place by steppin forth and walkin North/. (check explainations)



Explainations:
you average 40 posts per day/ (check profile) - Thats what his profile says
Fuck mournin for him....it can wait til next dawn/ - Paying our respects isnt important because it's him
he wanted to take my path, but didnt get past the gate/ - Wanted to diss on my level but couldnt
So I'm gonna take your place by steppin forth and walkin North/. - His location and the promised land/heaven.



Peace!!!

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect

hmmmmmm not really a close battle----thorn took everythin---and had more creative disses even though they weren't mind-bendin---LM ya flow was good but ya punches were not--they were too simple he has some dope similes that over-shined ya stuff---even ya personals---ya need better put downs---vote=thorn

yo peep my battles out---one with skrawni and 2 with necrid in the sigggggggg----

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If anybody votes on this can ya vote or drop a comment on this aswell please. It'd be apreciated.................................

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87332

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect

^^^explains it well... LM... all that explaining your disses was wack as hell... if u gotta explain it that much, your doin something wrong.. it was a iight verse tho..
thorn got this w/ more creativity
vote=thorn

hit this up:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85796
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^slept on shyyyyt

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thorn got this one, harder punches and heres a breakdown

structure= thorn
flow = thorn
punches = thorn
pesonals = both
metas = thorn

vote = thorn


just 1 thing tho

the line about he says fooball instead of soccer, that aint a diss

and honestly, callin da sport Football makes more sense than Soccer

In "football" you use "foot" to maneuver the "ball" so it makes sense, that line was weak, dont use it again
wasnt a diss anyways

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