checking in
10-20 lines
no bullshit votes.
but please lets get some votes

ok lets go

Thorn, your shits about to get torn,
im the type to make u wish u was never born
im ready to go ready to do it
ready to make a stand in this rap music
im hungry but im still in shape
love for rap since my Ready to Die tape
I'm shouting for attenion
and i should i mention g,
Im like a bed of nails, MCs cant sleep on me
Jay-Z said "the City is Mine" to clowns
well i got the hood, the burbs, and fucking farms locked down
im maintaining flows like water, ur shits wack
sounding worse than ODB on crack
I've been looking at my reflection for a long time
ready to kick ass, and spit these rhymes
until i make it
but in the mean time, dog you life i take it

My flows Iller than Sewege, Realiable like Good Dough Men
EJ Ur Battling a Vet, U couldnt have Protection Usin Trogan
Those words were more Basic than E.S.L Course Students
If U speaked every Language Ur Lines still wouldnt be Fluent
To Win U'd have to Plagiarize, But Unfortunately Its not Legalised
Structure was very Crooked, Like Over dosed Extacy Its Paralyzed
100% Bleek with My speach Like Sprained Ankles, E Your Weak
Does any1 know this Kid? He must be Lost like Dogs wit No Tag
Wouldnt be able to Capture me If my Avatar was a White Flag


Ur spits R Like Flatlands N' Stories with No Climax, Theres no Peak

My bad heres my verse

My flows Iller than Sewege, Realiable like Good Dough Men
EJ Ur Battling a Vet, U couldnt have Protection Usin Trogan
Those words were more Basic than E.S.L Course Students
If U speaked every Language Ur Lines still wouldnt be Fluent
To Win U'd have to Plagiarize, But Unfortunately Its not Legalised
Structure was very Crooked, Like Over dosed Extacy Its Paralyzed
100% Bleek with My speach Like Sprained Ankles, E Your Weak
Ur spits R Like Flatlands N' Stories with No Climax, Theres no Peak
Does any1 know this Kid? He must be Lost like Dogs wit No Tag
Wouldnt be able to Capture me If my Avatar was a White Flag

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structure = thorn
flow = thorn
punches = thorn
opener = none (didnt like thorns opener)
metas = thorn
creativity = thorn

vote = thorn

man thorn u need to be battling VETS and not noobs, u wont get respect if u keep battling ppl who's on much much much lower levels than where ur at

hit this battle up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87324

I am, I battled Abzstrack and Lady Divinidy

Im battling Com Soon, just relax

Poll Please++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

whoa ejk you are whack why in the hell would u try to battle someone who is a lot better than u. no hate ejk but thorn tore u up in flow wordplay sturcture creativity and anything else u can think of. u need to elevate before u battle someone like that cuz.

my vote=thorn

thorn got this easily,
ejk didnt do bad for a newbie but he was out classed here,
structure-thorn
punches-thorn
personals-thorn

vote-thorn


hit this up with a honest vote, bin goin like 10 days and gettin mad slept on

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85996

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i shouldnt even be forced to explain this vote
struct-thorn
punch
word
creativity
vocab
simply better
merked-ejk

dont battle newbs.

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We hang the petty thieves and appoint the great ones to public office
Aesop.

I know brother

This is my last newbie battle

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Thorn, hit my battle up with an honest vote then I'll vote here (just explain yourself a lil' more this time)

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1

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