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10-27-03, 04:21 AM
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**Life In My Eyes**
IP: 28EA 0509
Jus a quick key i did on life to me
life is considred to me a fragile object that can break at any moment... chances come, chances go but for the good ones, keep your hands on it... u have the good people and of course those backstabbing freinds.... some dont cherish life right....but are scared for it to end... moments come when u wanna cry cuz of ur loved ones leaving without a goodbye... but does anyone really know why it ends...all that happyness run dry... tears to me are feelings trying to squeeze out of us when were feeling mad... but its not all bad life can make us glad too...but some die young so cherish the life they didnt have... pain of knowing that one day u might be joining them..or maybe not... u want ur good days to be remembered but the bad days to be forgot.. when ur getting older u feel like ur young days didnt last long enough... when u think about it too much u break down and cry at even the small stuff... everyday ur life changes like the visions of ur freinds personality swings... i keep thinkin what will tomorrow bring...if ill be here or will life make its sting... so life to me is precious and i treat it with care...cuz its too good to spare... cuz broken hearts from ur loved ones and ur life cant be repared... Now For Some FeebBack
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10-27-03, 04:23 AM
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IP: 6042 1AD5
goos shit bro...
so life to me is precious and i treat it with care...cuz its too good to spare... cuz broken hearts from ur loved ones and ur life cant be repared... ^^im really feelin this line right now i like how you keot this short and sweet... very to the point... we need to collab keep this good shit up... you have elevated 10000% |
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10-27-03, 04:30 PM
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IP: 2E7E DE95
uppin biatches
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10-27-03, 05:14 PM
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IP: F728 AFD0
i like the message it send, sounds like you listen to alot of 2pac n that type of shit. The flow wasnt great but what you said was real.
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10-27-03, 05:19 PM
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..Soft Focus..
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IP: 1B3B C284
this was a good read, different type of flow to it, i felt it had a good aspect an the wordplay was good i think your vocab cud have been a little stronger but it was a nice piece keep it up peace
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10-28-03, 01:06 AM
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IP: 28EA 0509
UPPING THIS
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10-28-03, 03:59 AM
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IP: 28EA 0509
^^what that says
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10-28-03, 04:19 AM
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IP: 399E F0FD
this shit had a good message...and the emotion in this piece was definately felt...overall this was a nice read and a dope drop...keep doin' ya thing Sheppy...
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10-28-03, 04:15 PM
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IP: 2E7E DE95
thanks for that guys but i want more
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10-28-03, 04:18 PM
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You talkin to me?
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IP: AE7D DE0F
I liked this piece, real shit. a little improvement on structure would tighten your style up a bit, but all-in-all decent drop
"u want ur good days to be remembered but the bad days to be forgot.." ^^word peace |
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10-28-03, 04:21 PM
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IP: FF40 570D
Ur inproved..
Good,...nice drop, good structured, ..flow was off, some times, ...message was clear...nice read... U listen allot to 2pac?.. ^^^^^^^lol
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10-29-03, 12:23 AM
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IP: 28EA 0509
^^nuh i like eminem....i like 2pac but not as much as eminem i am influenced by him cuz i jus dont give a fuck..LOL
thanks guys
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