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Old 10-24-03, 05:03 AM   #1
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uh-oh...watch out...King of Thievez is on the mic again...
ready to bring the pain to ya brain...go grab ya Vicatin...
steady bringin' change to the game...when I write with pens...
heavy metal bringin' flamez to ya frame...when I'm snipin' men...
enlightenment is shared to those who are gettin' fundz to merk mc'z...
I bring insight to men who dared to get close to gettin' sunned like Mercury...
I purposly write for kidz who try to throw punchez but nervously strike and miss...
who think they hard cause they scurry and fight in fits but I hurry...spit spiteful shit...
ya damn clownz...I only give my manz poundz...
you sell gramz crushed...when I hand poundz...
son...if ya soft ass ain't gonna stand up...then stand down...
throw ya handz up...now put ya handz down...

^^^keystyle...I'm on some different flow shit in this...the flow changez every time the line lengths start gettin' different...
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Old 10-24-03, 06:54 AM   #2
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yeah i liked the style, had to read it a couple of times to get the flow but was good, some nice multis and i liked the message, i take it you dont like herbs....lol....some good shit, keep it up...peace ma dawg
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Old 10-24-03, 11:24 AM   #3
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NO YO HE WAS CONFESSING TO BE A HERB....LOL
I SHOULDNT HAVE TO COMMENT BUT I WILL OUT OF CREW OBLIGATION....LOL
IT WAS A SOLID PEACE YOU ELIVATE SO MUCH I CAN NEVER WAITE TO READ THE NEXT POST TWIN
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Old 10-25-03, 02:23 AM   #4
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^^^...
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Old 10-25-03, 03:25 AM   #5
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haha yea yea, this shit was hot. I liked how you started it off....it realy drew my eye and shit. Nice drop...keep it up and keep repin the bk nah mean,1
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Old 10-25-03, 04:14 AM   #6
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^^^of course...no doubt fam...Brook-nam por vida!!!!!!
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Old 10-25-03, 02:09 PM   #7
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yo nigga this shit is hot, i love the flow of this piece, nothin clashis
nice shit my nigga, keep it comin, peace
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Old 10-25-03, 10:08 PM   #8
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uppin this shit for you.......well worth it
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"Wether he is a sinner I do not know."
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Old 10-26-03, 09:17 AM   #9
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good drop, it was short but i liked the flow and the vocan wordplay was good aswell,

steady bringin' change to the game...when I write with pens...
heavy metal bringin' flamez to ya frame...when I'm snipin' men...

that line i thought was tight...good drop...9/10
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